Reviews for The Ugly Duckling Effect
scorpion moon goddess chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
This is my first time reading a kingdom hearts fic and I really hope you don't stop it. I just wonder who cloud is? I've met riku, sora, and leon(I really do think there's sexual tention between leon and sora anyway)

I hope you update soon.
BloodMistress chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
Pleae continue. It's really funny.
HiddenShadows13 chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
This is so funny. I find Riku very adorable when he blushes too much.I'm looking forward to the next chapter. So, please up-date soon.
Duo's Deathscythe hell chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
I love is really funny.
Deletedtheaccount chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
I think I might faint due to massive massive laving-ness of this fic. When I first read the summary i was like, "Um Riku and Cloud? Sora and Leon? . . . . . . Whatever, sounds interesting enough." And then I beagn reading. Boy, was I shocked. The fic is excellent and now officially a submittee for my fav KH fics of all time, which is really just then span of one year. Lol, I'm weird like that. Now, let's see where this all goes.

~Moomba Luver 385~ AKA ~ChocoboLuver724~
Tandakku chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Definately continue this one, I love the way it's written and I love Sora's personality. :D
MusiqMistress chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
Hahaha. This was just comedic enjoyable. The title says a lot and instantly caught my roaming attention. x] Glad I clicked. Cloud's impersonation of a help-service-counter-person was too much. I would've -loved- to have read the outcome of that little shindig-but the episode this first chapter has debuted upon works just as fine. 8D Can hardly wait to read more. Please update when possible! ~Musiq
Sky-Pirate-Tat chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Trash it? Are you insane? This is really. . . wonderful! I like your sense of humor and writing style. The relationships, both platonic and romantic are very realistic. I especially like how Sora teased Riku.

Please continue soon.

*Watashi no ai, Tat-chan
dimonyo-anghel chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
poor cloud! now sora stole your riku! please continue! i like it so far so please keep on writing! and are you going to explain how riku met cloud and how sora met leon?
Kori Tenshi chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Continue. That's all I'm sayin' Con-fucking-tinue. please? this is so great. update really fast! Dun leave us readers hanging!

lol

great-friggin-chappy tho!
Sono Suteki chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
I usually don't like to read this type of fic, but it's so sweet! From what I've read so far, you have the potential to be a great author! Keep up the good work and please continue this fic! Update soon!
AXENATOR chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD. HAH I even remembered that I had an account so that I could review [even though I can't figure out how to use the account to post anything xD] HAHA I can get around anything! That homely thing was so funny hehe Sora is HOMELY. You so better continue it! haha!
4th Floor Panda chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
I liked this, so don't trash it. D:

I'm looking forward to seeing how everything plays out.
yuffiegal chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Oh! this story is at a great start!

Plz plz plz plz plz plz UPDATE soon..I can't wait for whats going to happen-ya :)
ShadowedDarkness chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
OMG! This is hilariouse! _ you better continue this soon. Its awsomeness to the maz.
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