Reviews for The Ugly Duckling Effect
delete14 chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
lol, homely, nice, very nice, write more soon.
Spikey Silly chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Okay i'm not really into yaoi but this is a sweet story! I loved it, the humor rawked and the whole interaction. I like how Cloud was watching Sora, his hips sway and all that jazz, and the fuck you and Cloud's like, "Maybe later tonight" And how Sora batted his eyelashes like to say he knows he's sexy. This rawked and was realyl funny. The last part about getting Sora to shut up rawked. Wow great story, i'm defintely going to keep reading. Woot!
LYama chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
hehe i like this one, that was funny. update soon
Keitorin-chan chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
I love it! ; What an amazingly cute story. Just promise me you won't give it up! ; It's got a lot of promise and potential. Can't wait for an update!

Saffron
Amethyst Tiger Tears chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
wow...this is great! i love the concept! this has got to be like the best, most humorous first chapter i've ever read! the way you pull off sora is simply amazing! i love the sarcastic little fireball! please keep going! i loves it, loves it, loves it!
Violet Eternity chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
The homely one? LMAO.

Update soon please, loving it!
Blue Baroness chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Absolutely hilarious! I love it already! Especially the way Cloud makes his smart-ass comments, and how Sora shuts Riku up!

Please, countinue it!
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