Reviews for Consummation
spring smoothie chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
The story almost made me cry. So sad and beautiful!. Keep up the good writing!
Scenro chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Nice monologue there! 5 stars! woo!
Be My Forever chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
great story! please write more!
XToxic-ShockX chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
OMG, thats so sad. I'm crying right now! It was a very good story.
Hellokitty-4-ever chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
oh my...*sniffles* That's SO sad... I wanna cry...(but for some reason, I can't cry any more...) *sigh* It's a little cute...but mostly sad...
WinryElric chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
aw how sad ( but very very good! ) you gots a way with words _
Sull89 chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Wow. I really like this. It was sad, but I'm very impressed with the way you wrote it. Keep it up.

~Sull
Yutakia chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I was close to crying and I thought it was a great story
Yutakia chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
thats so sad I was near tears and I was getting close to sheading them so close to sheading I loved it it was awesome
DarkHonour chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
That was so sad...It's really tragic...I love this one much...tragedy of Winry and Ed having to part no matter what...anyway, good work for this piece! D
momo-mochi chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
That was lovely, simply lovely. I mean yes sad, in almost every aspect, but written beautifully. I loved it.
Little Fuji chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Aw... Ed-chan... TT
Nyago chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Winry died? That's so sad ;_; Poor Edward, he keeps watching people he cares for Die on him.

~Nyago