Reviews for The Morning After
Reading a Pulse chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Huh. That was interesting.
It kind of bothers me that I don't know how much time has passed in-story since the series. Are they in high school now? I like to imagine that they're in their mid-to-late teens. I don't want to think I just read about 12-year olds having sex.
But what I liked about this-and why it's probably the only thing even close to a "lemon" I'll ever favorite-is how the sex was almost beside the point. It was very character-focused the whole time and more invested on what the act meant to them than the act itself (non-graphic, which I appreciated, because I always find attempts at graphic sex in lit either cringe-worthy or unintentionally funny). If there's divergence from the show's characterization, it can easily be chalked up to the time that must have passed since the show, which is nice. FLCL's theme was growing up, after all. It had the heart, humor and awkwardness of its source material in spades. Congrats, chief.
Exiled Soul Nomad chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Granten chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Alright, this was cute. I'm not entirely sure about Naota's characterization but they handled this more believably than quite a few fics handle sex.
Gakuto1991 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Hope I will eventually come across a fanfic as good as this one. Kudos to you!
A Unique Kunoichi chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
You just made me able to tolerate this pairing. Great work. :)
funkmasterjo chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
That was amazingly good in every conceivable way. Also, I love the pairing.

Absaloutely beleivable and in keeping with the characters.

A fine possible future for FLCL
BrazeRancor chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
FLCL is awesome. As is this. More FLCL is required methinks...
xXRainbowxXxRebelXx chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
That was good for you being a virgin and all _~
silksponge chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
wow. Naota seemed a little off at the dialogue near the end but only a little. Great Job as whole. I think I'll go find some FLCL fanfics to keep the Eri love going. what did she see?
Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Awh man this was good, loved it, keep up the good work
imanokie01 chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
I thought it was good. You don't give yourself enough credit.
EM-Mega chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Awesome story and I like it with all the obvious hints and teasin it really draws out the story ya know?anyways yup your story is awesome and so are you
ametomoe chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
hmm you got a good naota internal conflict goin on there that we dont really witness but (if we are big freaks that watch flcl episodes and try to analyze them because they mean something more to us (i guess i'm talking about myself here)) we can tell that he isn't really over haruko because she was like the most important part of his life when he met her because nothing interesting had happened to him before and i feel like i'm rambling. keep writing dude.
Dirk Bolero chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
I was pleasantly surprised by this. While at first I thought it would be another FLCL lemon, it turns out not to be lemony at all (in my opinion, anyway) and quite well written. Then again, why should I be surprised, when I've been an avid reader of your fanfiction for years?

So I can at least be thankful the first fanfiction I have read in a long time was as well-written as this. Keep up the good work.
forever-exile chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
Cool story man... I also love the anime and I just so happen to have submitted my own FURI KURI FF. This story was awesome, eh, better than my crappy lemons... XD Well, good job.
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