Reviews for Falling away
machievelli chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
To be posted 13 August 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.

I will tag those I liked as pick of the week. Check at StarwarsKnights for the best of the best.

Post KOTOR: Revan gives one last gift

The piece is poignant, the struggle to save both Revan and the child, the fall, and her end. Then the boy now a young man remembering what he had been told as a toddler.

Pick of the Week
Lysandria chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Wow... this story made me cry. I think that's the highest praise I could give a story.
Rei Talyn chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Wow... I feel sorry for Carth and Revan... and the others too of course.

So Jake got Revan's gift to him afterall then. So sad... nice ending.
noneko chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Hmm... interesting plot idea. I think the poem at the end provided a nice kind of break from all the depressive-ness. Thanks for the review!
qt3.14159 chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Very nice. It makes me feel really bad for Carth... But it's very nicely written.
Shadows Run chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Sniff. Tissues please. This is very touching without being too angsty. It makes sense because you point out that she's on weird planet, trying to distance herself and then she does just that. Sniff. Poor carth. Very good.