|Reviews for First|
| bobbymcfoogle chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
You have such a beautiful writing style, I seriously loved this.
| Venusian Lovebird chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
Simply put, I love it! I'm speechless!
| rainbowishprincess chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I'm not much for Seth slash but WOAH, this rocked! The wording was beautiful and beautifully and thoroughly described.
| midtowngirl89 chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Wonderful. Slash fics are just so...intriguing. It was captivating from the first word. And, I loved the last line. I like how you repeated it at the beginning and the end. Great job!