Reviews for First
bobbymcfoogle chapter 1 . 6/12/2007

You have such a beautiful writing style, I seriously loved this.
Venusian Lovebird chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
Simply put, I love it! I'm speechless!
ExMachiina chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I'm not much for Seth slash but WOAH, this rocked! The wording was beautiful and beautifully and thoroughly described.
midtowngirl89 chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Wonderful. Slash fics are just so...intriguing. It was captivating from the first word. And, I loved the last line. I like how you repeated it at the beginning and the end. Great job!