Reviews for Broken Dreams, Broken Future
zafaran chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Well, of course we want to know what happens next. How did Harry end up in Azkaban? What lead to the torture, who tortured him, etc. Congratulations on your wedding last year. Has your life settled down enough (and your laptop agreed to word again) so that you can continue this story? Pretty please. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
lantana chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
oh, do continue, by all means! I'm a sucker for angst, and this promises to be so good!
Alorkin chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Yes! This has great potential! I can only offer one criticism. Given the condition he was in, when Snape found him, withdrawn into his mind, and his failure to recognize Poppy, even though he mentions her name moments before, I'd wonder if a broken Harry would be lucid enough to rant like he did. I could be wrong.

If you do continue, this, who are you going to have turn on Harry? I know most authors like to have Ron and Hermione betray him, but, hinestly, I can't see either of them doing so. They've been together for far too long. Fudge is a corrupt bastard and deserves to be eaten by the magical creature of your choice! Please continue this. Alorkin
rosiegirl chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Not bad so far. Why was Minerva a bit bitchy? "Treat a superior", gee after how many months of torture doesn't Harry deserve to be a little cranky?
SharpenedSpoon chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Well written and makes the reader want to know what happened to hp. more chapters!
Batman FTW chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
Nice. Very angsty, very descriptive. Definitely worth continuing.
serena23 chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
This has a lot of potential. Please continue the good work.
Lo chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
Well started, you have your reader curious how H ended up in prison and what will happen next. Keep going.