Reviews for Bitter Friends
etraya chapter 2 . 7/6/2005
I love this story, so much in fact that i am reviewing your story, while on holiday in Paris, am actually very tired at the mo, so soz if this makes no sense.

Your writing style is great and the idea of the story is fun, i hope you are able to update soon.
LittleBirdy003 chapter 2 . 7/6/2005
This is great, I hope to see more. Although there is one problem! It's not really realistic that Ria could speak Latin so fluently already. Is she saying thing things like f*ck (not sure if I'm allowed to swear in reviews) and 'Oh my god' in latin? I didn't know that latin had those words.

PLEASE try to include ALL of the knights! They are sorely missed in this story! Plus it would be much more interesting if Ria didn't fit in so quickly. It's rather boring if she just suddenly apart the King Arthur time, it takes the interest out of the 'girl going back in time' plot.

Lolita :)
UpsideRight chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
Please update soon.
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