Reviews for The Birthday Present
Guest chapter 16 . 1/30/2019
Wonderful character sketches of Remus and Argus.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/29/2019
It's interesting how 15 years of reading HP and HP fanfic has made me hate Albus more with every word. This however is the first story I've read where Albus seems to be interested in saving Tom Riddle. What the hell could be the best outcome, Azkaban? Albus sympathizing with the enemy. Wow.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/28/2019
One tiny error: Before Snape mentioned Switzerland, Draco seemed to know that Snape's trip would be to Switzerland.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/28/2019
This is unique and amazing, and I've only read 6 chapters so far.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/27/2019
Please don't ever have Albus wake up. LOL
nedjheret chapter 52 . 11/28/2018
Hmm. I wonder... It takes 4 years to go through a Leap Year cycle ... I rather hope it's a minimum of 8 years for Severus!
nedjheret chapter 46 . 11/28/2018
It was sweet of Winky to tell Severus she loves him! Definitely made me smile!

Nedj
Liz Ben chapter 85 . 9/16/2018
was entirely too absorbed in this wordy, lengthy story that painted a picture that i did not want to look at. you have magic in your pen. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
Ann Non chapter 85 . 8/13/2018
I enjoyed reading this. It held my interest all the way to the end. Thanks for writing & posting.
Guest chapter 85 . 8/12/2018
Re-reading sequel so far and so I've come back to the original. This is a fantastic story which improves on re-reading. Thank you so much. Snape caring for the apprentices is heartwarming. 'Only connect'.
JG chapter 5 . 7/20/2018
I really like the friendship you wrote between Snape and Hagrid. I haven't seen it done before. And how sweet yet sad that Fang is Snape's only go-to for a cuddle...
JG chapter 2 . 7/20/2018
Loving this so far! Especially the letters Sev wrote to misc. parents. Very amusing!
BlueWater5 chapter 84 . 7/15/2018
I'm typing this here since you can only review a chapter once and I reviewed the final chapter the first time I read your story. Wow! A second reading only confirms what a marvelous story this is. Intricately crafted and beautifully written, I found myself immersed in the world you created. Your characters are believable whether on the side of the Order or the Death Eaters, and your vivid descriptions make it easy to visualize the locale, whether Hogwarts or a cemetery in Bosnia. I'm very glad you have started to post the sequel - I look forward to seeing what comes next. Please update as frequent as possible.
BlueWater5 chapter 83 . 7/14/2018
I love how Binns is actually helpful. I also enjoyed the memorable scene of Harry's vision of the Great Hall the following year.
BlueWater5 chapter 81 . 7/14/2018
"I can't believe I was so weak. I can't believe I defied him like that" - one of the best phrases I've ever read in fan fiction: darkly, laugh out loud funny!
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