|Reviews for Pokemon Legacy: Rain's Journey|
| neogirl7900 chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
I don't know. Kinda rushed. And why would all of Danielle, Leia, Devon, AND Rain be getting Pokemon at the same time? Wouldn't they have had different birthdays?
You did actually manage to write it without a late trainer, which is good.
And shouldn't Rain have known it was her tenth birthday?
Besides that, it's okay. Nothing terrible, but nothing wonderful, either.