Reviews for Altered States
Obiwan456 chapter 9 . 5/8/2010
I love this story! I never got to see Shallow Grave, but know enough about it to kind of keep up. Someday...Anyway, I know it's been years, but PLEASE, PLEASE post the next chapter! Only one more? Hope you haven't totally dumped this. ~Obi's MOm
Murgatroyd chapter 10 . 3/23/2006
If you aren't planning to continue this story, could you at least post a brief note summarizing how it would have ended?
Nienna Telrunya chapter 10 . 1/10/2006
One more chapter to go - will you not finish that very last one? Leaving off in the middle of a story is so very cruel. And near the end too! It's quite good. Not so much, perhaps, as some of your other stories, but I like how you included the stone and . . . oh, please finish. I'm rather attached to it now
elfgirlsjf chapter 10 . 6/25/2005
when are you going to update? I've been waiting for a new chapter for nearly a year! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
brierhart chapter 10 . 5/24/2005
So, where's the last chapter? I'm dying to find out what happens.
Dark Fire chapter 10 . 2/22/2005
I know that this is a bit of a long shot. You haven't updated this story in more than two years and I don't know if you even read it's reviews any more. However, I love this story and periodically come back to reread it, always wishing that there was more. Please don't let Obi-Wan/Alex fall to the dark side! I sincerely hope you continue this story, no matter how unlikely that is.
Phoenix Flight chapter 10 . 11/14/2004
One more chapter? It's nearly been two years!
elfgirlsjf chapter 10 . 8/5/2004
When are you going to update again?

Its been,like,forever since the last update!
elfgirl chapter 10 . 3/7/2004
its really good so far,please write more soon!
Dark Afterlife chapter 10 . 8/21/2003
What is taking so *# $* long? Well? I am doing my best to wait patiently for the next chapter, but nearly 8 months is a bit long. Please hurry!
Culf chapter 10 . 4/29/2003
Is there a new chapter coming up? I am the president of the whiney-annoying-promise things they can't keep-reviewers club, and you do not want us on you back!
Amber chapter 10 . 4/18/2003
Please finish soon! I love this story, and the fact that you added immortals, well the best of both worlds.

Irena K chapter 10 . 3/10/2003

::mad fangirl cackling::

Phew. Glad I got that off my chest.

Admittedly, I don't know Shallow Grave at all, but that's sort of making this all the more fun. There's a bit of mystery and excitement and some people with the strangest sense of humor I've seen in quite a while and George Lucas making trouble. Though every time I see Xanatos, I *still* think Gargoyles and wonder why he isn't back in New York but then I'm a dork, so that probably explains that.

One tiny nitpick - formatting for the first chapter is still kinda wonky and the first sentence starts in present tense before switching to past the next. As I said, nitpick. Total nitpick. Because the rest? Quite good.
gjegje chapter 10 . 2/3/2003

You cant just stop there!

Ah well, just let me know when youve written the rest, will you?


Death Rider chapter 10 . 2/1/2003
Good story. I'm glad Alex is imortal. Can hardly wait for next chapter.

Death Rider

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