I love this story! I never got to see Shallow Grave, but know enough about it to kind of keep up. Someday...Anyway, I know it's been years, but PLEASE, PLEASE post the next chapter! Only one more? Hope you haven't totally dumped this. ~Obi's MOm

If you aren't planning to continue this story, could you at least post a brief note summarizing how it would have ended?

One more chapter to go - will you not finish that very last one? Leaving off in the middle of a story is so very cruel. And near the end too! It's quite good. Not so much, perhaps, as some of your other stories, but I like how you included the stone and . . . oh, please finish. I'm rather attached to it now

when are you going to update? I've been waiting for a new chapter for nearly a year! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

So, where's the last chapter? I'm dying to find out what happens.

I know that this is a bit of a long shot. You haven't updated this story in more than two years and I don't know if you even read it's reviews any more. However, I love this story and periodically come back to reread it, always wishing that there was more. Please don't let Obi-Wan/Alex fall to the dark side! I sincerely hope you continue this story, no matter how unlikely that is.

One more chapter? It's nearly been two years!

When are you going to update again?

Its been,like,forever since the last update!

its really good so far,please write more soon!

What is taking so *# $* long? Well? I am doing my best to wait patiently for the next chapter, but nearly 8 months is a bit long. Please hurry!

Is there a new chapter coming up? I am the president of the whiney-annoying-promise things they can't keep-reviewers club, and you do not want us on you back!

Please finish soon! I love this story, and the fact that you added immortals, well the best of both worlds.

Amber

Methos!

::mad fangirl cackling::

Phew. Glad I got that off my chest.

Admittedly, I don't know Shallow Grave at all, but that's sort of making this all the more fun. There's a bit of mystery and excitement and some people with the strangest sense of humor I've seen in quite a while and George Lucas making trouble. Though every time I see Xanatos, I *still* think Gargoyles and wonder why he isn't back in New York but then I'm a dork, so that probably explains that.

One tiny nitpick - formatting for the first chapter is still kinda wonky and the first sentence starts in present tense before switching to past the next. As I said, nitpick. Total nitpick. Because the rest? Quite good.

AAAARG!

You cant just stop there!

Ah well, just let me know when youve written the rest, will you?

thanks

gjegje

Good story. I'm glad Alex is imortal. Can hardly wait for next chapter.

Death Rider

Ghost of the Deadlands