|Reviews for Egyptian Requiem|
| egyptionkitty chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
hello! Wow, me likies. update soon, kay?
| Silwyth chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
O, love it so far!
Nefertiri's character is really cool.
I especially love the Lower and Upper Egypt part, good way to mix in some history!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Only other comment:
When your characters a talking each of the sentences are broken up with "'s right before and after the .
For example: "-great idea Nefertiri." "Now we should be safe..."
Shouldn't it just be: "-great idea Nefertiri. Now we should be safe..." wihtout the "'s in the middle?
| Free Angel -dead chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
o0o0o0o0o! This is interesting so far! Love to see what will happen! UPDATE SOON!