Reviews for Egyptian Requiem
egyptionkitty chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
hello! Wow, me likies. update soon, kay?
Silwyth chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
O, love it so far!

Nefertiri's character is really cool.

I especially love the Lower and Upper Egypt part, good way to mix in some history!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Only other comment:

When your characters a talking each of the sentences are broken up with "'s right before and after the .

For example: "-great idea Nefertiri." "Now we should be safe..."

Shouldn't it just be: "-great idea Nefertiri. Now we should be safe..." wihtout the "'s in the middle?

Update ASAP!
Free Angel -dead chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
o0o0o0o0o! This is interesting so far! Love to see what will happen! UPDATE SOON!