Reviews for Shatter
madamarch92 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Smexy,, This Is The First Remus And Sirius Ive Read,,,, I Should Read More,,,,,
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Cute :)
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
XD!Oh my god!Lol,that was just,god,the way they lie sometimes!Awesome!
ClockworkScales chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
I write a review for every story I read. Unless I don't finish it, of course.

I love this line:

"his speech accented by heavy breathing."

Some writers forget that writing has to appeal to more than one sense, rather than just seeing. And perhaps feeling. What about scent? Sound? Taste? So this line was very good, and I like it very much - no! Not just because it's heavy breathing - though that's not bad - because I can picture/hear it clearly. It's good.

checkerbloom chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
This made me breathless for some reason, I can't put my finger one what exactly it was that made me breathless, probably the entire fic, I loved it.
seanbiggerstaffrox chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
Oh, wow, amazing! Completely, and utterly amazing!
AnotherSurvivor chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
holy... *blinks* this left me shell-shocked, for sum reason i rell dunt get. relli sweet. i loved it. love it.
Amanita Jackson chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
"I think Arthur may be jealous"

"He can learn to live with it"

v funny. i laughed out loud, and i don't usually do that.
De-Crescendo chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Very sweet and simple.

It chased all of my previous angst away.
Hogwardsbagofskittles chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
oh wow i loved this. so cute...
Emerald707 chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
lol, how cute. Wonderful, really. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
TheBoltShapedScar chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
This was nice... Very sweet. I liked your description of the 'thing' I also like that you sort of jump right into the story, instead of doing a lot of introducing
The Miss Marauders chapter 1 . 3/30/2006

x C x
Ms.Merope chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
I love Sirius.. I love Remus.. I love the combination.. I love this story.. Lots of I loves here.. :)
Slasharific chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
Is that all? I like it! write more!
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