Reviews for Flaming Fullmetal
batsbloodsoup chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
When Roy said, "You do realize that Hawkeyes niece if 5'5 right?" That was GREAT. That was a nice burn right there. And Ed was only 4'11, BTW.

The ending...
Fullmetal.Alchemist.Fan chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
I dont think that rape should be excused by love...Ed is stubborn and said that himself. Maybe you should go into a little more detail...

Other than that, great job overall
Reviewwiz chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Your fic was very good. when, and if you chose to revise this, I ask that you add more detail to the rape scene, and an even grater amount of detail to edward's emotions, feelings, and actions when confronted by mustang anfter that fatefull night.
Prussian Blue Tears chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Fuck... That was sad...
Ryuuk96 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
and after all that all ed cares about is being called short.
Whiteone chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Ok, I'll be honest. I think this story is very well written, but the ending is very rushed and it quite ruined the thrilling feeling I've had while reading the last few parts.:( Maybe if you just rewrite the ending and make the story longer, it would be perfect. But of course it's just my own opinion, maybe you wrote it like this on purpose.:) Good job anyway, I really enjoyed reading this.
ipwnuall chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
XO woah! ed still likes roy? that kids insane! good story tho.
Alliecard chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
I think It was a very detailed story.
bffimagine chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
I love the ending, but it all seems a little too lovey dovey for the ending of a rape story. If it were more of an embarrassment, then perhaps.
Rei-Sanjo chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
Aww! It was perfect. Fluff, Angst, Humor, Tension...Yaoi.

Loved it!
To Destination chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
its good
Lina Inverse the Dramata chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
This story was nifty, I loved the last two lines of it. Before I even read the story though I was laughing at the title. Cause there were so many ways to take 'Flaming Fullmetal'.
Psycho-Fox chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
It was awsome.I loved it.
Kyon-kyon06 chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
That was...frickin awsome! I love stuff like this!
toxicbullets chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Poor Edward I thought he was gonna flip out on Roy in the end. I was like "No" T_T

*coughs* _;; Sorry _;;

I really did like the ending because... I did ;D simply it was great.
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