Reviews for The Unfortunate Don
J chapter 10 . 10/31/2005
A very interesting idea, thatI have enjoyed.

Good use of the characters, keep it up, try not to take it any farther - Willow's getting a little too maternally capable, in my view.

Main issue for me: that scene with the police and FBI talking - I don't know who is with what, and had to piece it together - a good story should make it as easy as possible to do so if the confusion is inevitable.

Anyway, kudos for the idea and the story so far!
war90 chapter 10 . 10/31/2005
nice to see the Council being useful for a investagation in sunnydale that should be story looking forward to your next chapter.
war90 chapter 9 . 8/26/2005
Cliff was a nice is not good for Faith if they can't get Buffy out soon I bet the Council arranges Faith to have a story looking forward to your next chapter.
war90 chapter 8 . 8/23/2005
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Mats Forsen chapter 7 . 7/17/2005
Great story, I hope you continue this sometime. :)
WhiteWolf 3 chapter 7 . 7/16/2005
In case of doubt always go for the head.
Antonio chapter 6 . 7/13/2005

at-nightfall chapter 5 . 7/12/2005
I like the more grown up Buffy.
ThirdGorchBro chapter 5 . 7/12/2005
Poor Don Bennidetto! If only he knew what he was getting himself into. I like this story a lot and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
WhiteWolf 3 chapter 3 . 7/7/2005
Tara is dead or did you mean to write Dawn?
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