Reviews for Nocturne
Kyra chapter 1 . 10/17/2008 this fic dropped? I really like it! Please continue!
KiaraKlay chapter 1 . 1/24/2006

i'm fascinated. keep up the good work.
EllipsisObsessed chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
great start i cant wait to see how the story continues D please update soon D
melcarisa chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Wow! this is good, verry good! I'll be looking foreward to more! Please update soon!
Defying Definition chapter 1 . 8/13/2005

I like it. I like it a lot.
yimie chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
This is amazing. What an attention-grabber! Please hurry and update soon!
Forensic Photographer711 chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Wow this is great so far, Im thinking ur mystery gal may be a cat that goes meow, ya that was lame. You have Crane down awesomely, I loved how u described Sin's fear, and how Crane though of it that was the awesomest part I thought. Please update soon!
The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Um. Meow? I tried to review this thing a few times but was being stupid, so I apologize. Anyway, this dominates, and Dr. Crane is certainly an interesting villain to write. I think you've hit his character pretty well too. I kept thinking of Cillian Murphy as I read this. "Would you like to see my mask?" Anyway, the mood in this is perfect, and your writing is beautiful as always.
quicksilver2402004 chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
This sounds really cool. I hope you update soon.
Strawberry Sunburn chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
this is great. interesting, well written and your portrayal of crane is right on.
Karina of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/8/2005


...'re really good, you know that?

Please write more.
Emii chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
This is great! This flows nicely and isn't too wordy, and the plot so far is plausible - the fact that you've tried to avoid the Sue theme is reflected in your writing. The focus on her and her brother is just right - well done. If there's more to come, I await eagerly :)
Elegant Solution chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
You already know that I love this and can't wait for more
Sealink chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Could "Sin" be a contraction of "Selina", as in "Selina Kyle"?

I love your villains. They always creep me out
The Metal Mulisha chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Interesting. The mention of cats has me thinking about who this might possibly be. Hm, could it be the infamous Princess of Plunder you speak of? Update soon!

- The Metal Mulisha
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