|Reviews for Window to the Soul|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/18
"Although he seems to be beginning to trust Sirius and Remus, he is not so trusting of Albus Dumbledore and for good reason."
It is true, he has good reason not to trust Dumbledore. But why should he trust Sirius and Remus, when they obviously enforce Dumbledore's wishes and keep him trapped? Especially as he himself says just a few sentences before "Why should I trust you?" to them?
And why does he tell so much about his family (except to inform the reader)?
| TheGoldKingWith9Tails chapter 8 . 11/11
French tip. Mon Geôlier actually translates to mine jailor, or in your language's correct grammar, can also be translated to my/the jailor.
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 25 . 8/27
| kingthe13 chapter 19 . 7/1
Well this is going to end badly
| kingthe13 chapter 14 . 6/30
...the fuck is going on...
| hallelujah I'm a bum chapter 25 . 6/22
good but confusing as heck. why did Tom go by Antonio and why did he change sides with Dumbledore? Also why did Dumbledore ally with Tom so easily? I feel like you should answer those questions in the story and it would make it better. I still loved and had some good laughs
| rowenasheir chapter 25 . 5/19
What rank did the circlet indicate?
| Shelby-The-Red-Mew chapter 4 . 4/8
| Fallwalker chapter 14 . 3/21
I know this story is done, but too many author notes. It takes up half the story.
| senawario chapter 1 . 2/28
one of the fastest to go from "hmm, interesting" to "WTF?" to "bleaah, plonk!"
| Quoba chapter 3 . 2/9
I can't understand why Harry does answer all questions. Can't he just tell them to fuck off? And then he try to escape?
Great fic for the moment until now btw
| loleo chapter 14 . 1/22
And again, a dumb author, who writes his or her review comments into the story. You can do that in privat, in a forum, as an answer in mails. BUT, no REAL author would write so much review bla bla, only to lengthen their story.
| Asmodeus45 chapter 25 . 12/4/2015
well as she wasnt mentioned and as Harry seems the type to know the oddballs of this universe id guess that the mother is either a demoness or Luna Lovegood
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 25 . 11/27/2015
| missgsmith51 chapter 25 . 11/25/2015
Good story ... I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.