Reviews for Oath Breaker
Bad English chapter 19 . 6/12/2015
Uh, how to see the writer reply... CRY!How stupid I am!OMG, I can't even find my comment!
Bad English chapter 20 . 6/12/2015
Like my name, my English grade never has been excellent... I use the translator to translate what I want to say. So this comment is full of grammar mistakes,of course.(XDDD~)
This article is the best one that I've seen.. It is full of exotic style... Or, I see the version gives me a translation of the unique tone. I like it very much.. All of the settings were fascinating, especially for the wild Domestic Elf (Don't know why, I have a particularly deep memory for this)and about all the dark wizards traditional..Have to say, in China, Potter Harry series of the same humanities rarely do so well. I nag to say a lot, just want to tell my dear author adults: I like this article very muchhhhhh!I was so lucky to meet it.

Love you.
Totally can't understand that what a pile of English words' mean is.

Add a few words:if you see this funny and loopholes comments, and reply to a few words, I will be happy to to explode ~ happy to fly~happy to decide to learn English well~!(You should know learn English is harder than fight with a Johnson)

Chinese version:就像我的名字,我的英语成绩从来没有得到过优秀…我用翻译器把我想说的翻译了过来,所以这条评论当然到处都充满了语法错误XDDD~


Machaon's Apprentice chapter 28 . 3/27/2015
A truly fascinating AU, with moments of breathtaking action !
Sketchy-d00d chapter 28 . 3/17/2015
Brilliant! I always love a good Creature!Draco fic. I love all the little translations and stuff. I especially love the little poem for talking to crows. In fact, I memorised it XD I said it to my dad and he gave me this odd look before continuing what he was doing. -Cat.
Sini chapter 28 . 3/17/2015
I've read this about three times now and I love it!:) well done!
wytygr chapter 28 . 3/12/2015
this is the best Harry Potter fanfic ever. i personnaly fid it more fulfilling in characters and plot than JKR's original.

most of her characters were as shallow as a puddle. even tho a character like Ron Weasley with always be an arrogant, loudmouthed, biased, little arsehole.

and it must be galling for some of the darksided kids to have to hear his loudmouthed rants with one breathe then in the next seeing him shovelling food into his gaping maw like a pig.

your characters are so much more. filled with muchness. and i love your take on the opposing sides. there is always the dark hidden truth to history.
sydsydgray chapter 28 . 3/1/2015
This story was so fascinating to read. I loved the culture of the dark wizards. You have an amazing imagination and thank you for weaving such an amazing story together. You captured both of Harry and Malfoy's personalities so well. Awesome Job :)
Crimson chapter 28 . 2/9/2015
I must say, you got yourself such a mind blowing novel here :) I've read several fanfics of Draco siding with the Light side; however, very little portray him with his Slytherin traits. This Draco that you conjured was very realistic, as well as your other characters. I also deeply appreciate the time, effort, and imagination you put into making a history for the Dark magic. How I wish it was canon! I wish I could know more the traditions, it is fascinating! It was very interesting to read, and it was simply amazing! It built a stable background for the Death Eaters and it made their side more, let's say sympathetic. Also, the background of Merlin and Morgan was very informative and an interesting tool to use in this fanfic. I also admire how you painted the Light side to be merely ignorant and fearful, rather than arrogant murderers. And thank you for the slow building romance between Harry and Draco, as it would not be believable otherwise :)
Thank you thank you thank you thank you, this story will be for sure be in my top 5 Drarry fanfics:)
hiddenheadspace chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
May I podfic this work? The podfic would be published over at my ao3 account, "maplewix". I would really like to podfic this but I'll understand if not.
Holly chapter 28 . 12/23/2014
This song reminded me of your wonderful, amazing and incredibly well written story.

or look up "Faun - Walpurgisnacht"
Guest chapter 28 . 12/10/2014
Thank you. I throughly enjoyed it.
lips-like-morphinee chapter 28 . 11/29/2014
This was one of the best stories ive read in a very long time
TinaMaki chapter 28 . 11/21/2014
I absolutely love this story! It's extremely interesting, original and I always love political fanfics!
The end was rather sad, but also beautiful...
runqi chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
Hooray! I love explosions!
Lunacom chapter 28 . 8/14/2014
This was truly a great story. I'm going to the sequel!
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