Reviews for Oath Breaker
HauntedPast chapter 9 . 1/17/2006
I absolutley love this!

I can't describe it- I just love the snappy dialogue and I adore what you've done with Draco's character!

It's refreshing and different- exactly what I've been looking for.

Please update soon.
Meggplant chapter 9 . 1/16/2006
you never cease to amaze. this is a wonderful chapter. every chapter you write, you introduce more questions than answers, and i love it. it's like a mystery novel, only better, because i'm sure there's to be a Harry/Draco bit sometime in the future! *grins*

i wish someone would just wack Ron and Hermione over the head. you've managed to expand on all the reasons why they both bother me in canon, and having their issues so obvious makes me wonder why the hell Harry puts up with them so well. if they were my friends, i'd have gotten fed up much sooner, and told them to get over themselves. also, i sort of wish Harry would take the hint and go look up more on wizarding history or something. you hit the nail on the head - no matter how prominent Harry's profile in the wizarding world, he knows nothing about it, and until he does, will never understand what he's fighting for, nor why he should care in the first place.

again. your story is absolutely astounding - the writing is beautiful, the characters true, and i can't wait for the next chapter.


Yue-Yu chapter 9 . 1/15/2006

I love this fanfic!

Its slow and extremely detained.

Well written and makes reader

know that there must be a plot

behind all it. _ Or your just

very good at writing...

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon! ~*Yue*~
Animejo chapter 9 . 1/11/2006
Love it, like it. Waiting for more.
ura-hd chapter 9 . 1/8/2006
What's wrong with Harry?

Great chapter!
eyeinthesky chapter 9 . 1/5/2006
Love all the locked gazes. Can't get enough of either of their eyes.
Smenzer chapter 9 . 1/4/2006
Another wonderful chapter! So Lucius can turn into a wyvern too, huh? Cool! :)

Chopping up that dragon for parts sure sounds messy, esp the eye bit. Ugh! (shudders) It was very realistic though. Great writing. Wonder why Harry has to take the medicine? And who rigged that window to break? There must be a nasty person in the school somewhere...

Of course, there usually IS you know... I dont suppose any paintings in the area saw anything? Most likely not...

I do hope Lucius & Narcissa are OK. Scary to think that his nightmares are really memories...

Hope you post more soon!
Smenzer chapter 8 . 1/4/2006
Wow... I cant beleive dragons broke into the school! And they did so much damage, too! And to find Draco can turn into a wyvern! Really cool!

What a fantastic chapter! :)
Smenzer chapter 7 . 1/4/2006
Its a good thing Draco found and saved his owl. It would have been really horrible if he had been too late. Maybe the same person who had tampered with the potion ingredients also jinxed the owl? Draco better be careful and stay with the trio - before he gets framed!

GREAT chapter! I'm going to reccomend this fic to my friend. :)
Smenzer chapter 6 . 1/4/2006
Hmm... wonder who the nasty spy in the school is? Suppose it could be anyone...

GREAT story! The stuff on the dark magic is very well thought out and quite clever, too. It must have took a lot of work. Bravo for doing an excellent job of it.

So the Slytherin dorms are under the lake? Wow... who ever would have thought? And it was nice that Draco lended Harry a robe. :)
Smenzer chapter 5 . 1/4/2006
Hmm... now that was a very dangerous class indeed! I wonder if he should have been teaching that potion? Slughorn, I mean.

I think Draco was very surprised when he found out that the Golden trio was there to protect him! Does it mean that his worst nightmare may eventually come true? It certainly is running throughout the entire story... maybe at the end somewhere? Hmm...
Smenzer chapter 4 . 1/4/2006
Well, I think Harry & Hermione got a big shock now that they realize what dark magic is. It does sound very nasty, doesnt it? Violent and bloody and all... its obvious the spells are designed for killing people..

Once again a wonderfully written chapter with great descriptions and lots of imagination!
Smenzer chapter 3 . 1/4/2006
So Harry is realy going to learn dark magic, er? With that bad temper he has, it might suite him well. Maybe too well once he gets going.

Poor draco. Sounds like he's terrified of Muggles. Is there a real reason for his fear or is it all based on old stories, like what happened in Salem, Mass.? Has he himself ever met a Muggle? Anyway, his nightmares sound terrible.

That must have been awful when that hand grabbed him in the bag!

And why did a bottle of potion ingrediant come out of the bag when he never put it in? Was it already inside?
Smenzer chapter 2 . 1/4/2006
Now THIS is what HBP should have been like! Its filled with action, a bit of mystery, great plot and lots of Malfoys. :)

Smenzer chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Wow! This is a really incredible story! The details are just amazing, too! I'm glad I found it. Hope Draco's hand will be all right. It sounds like it was frozen maybe (numb) or maybe its nerve damage.. or those little things in the hand that make the fingers move. You can see them on the back of your hand - not sure what you call them tho...

That's really something that Voldy can alter the weather. Was he killed in the fire? I hope so but I bet he escaped somehow...

Why did Lucius switch sides?
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