|Reviews for A Dotty Inquisition-Filler for "The Artful Dodger"|
| Truckee Gal chapter 1 . 6/27/2018
Dotty and Amanda both got a kick out of Alan Squire's reaction to Dotty's outburst. Makes me wonder how this would have played out if Dotty's outrage caused Amanda to stop seeing Alan.
This, your only fanfiction story, was recommended reading by the ladies who host Mrs. King's Chronicles to be read in conjunction with their "The Artful Dodger" podcast.
| AlaskanFan chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
Very good. That would have been a fun scene in the show.
| Debbie chapter 1 . 7/6/2001
Very good! You captured Dotty's characterization just right!
| newkid chapter 1 . 4/11/2001
Good filler, Pandagirl!
| Toad chapter 1 . 4/9/2001
Cute story. I loved Dotty's interruptions. Keep up the good work!
| Bridget chapter 1 . 4/9/2001
This was very cute. Nice job. :)
| sac12080 chapter 1 . 4/7/2001
I think you did great, first story or not. I would have reworded the one paragraph of Allen's thoughts to something like...the smile on Alan's face revealed none of the pleasure he found in the planting of his listening device on Amanda's hand or something like that to convey more of a "showing" than "telling" situation. But that is a very small thing and something I am continually reminded of by my betas. I thought you were true to the characters and had very good dialogue.