|Reviews for Captive|
| BMT and SuperMoose chapter 6 . 9/12/2008
I like this story. It's an interesting AU concept. :) It seemed to me like everyone was in character, but I'm not a Yu Yu Hakusho expert! I liked the myth references too.
| Meihi.Hekiwarai chapter 6 . 7/24/2008
This story is amazing and it totally rocks!
| Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
This is pretty good!
| MissPoke chapter 4 . 6/20/2008
can you feel the love tonight...
- the lion king
| Mattricole chapter 2 . 6/1/2008
It's getting a lot better in my opinion.
| Mattricole chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Story's pretty good.
| nitaBonita chapter 6 . 4/21/2008
well, i really enjoyed this fic! it was very good! u have interesting ideas! n i loved it fully!
| sestrilla chapter 6 . 12/27/2007
great job i love it i mean its alsome well done
| Hebi R chapter 3 . 11/27/2007
I think the whipping boy was supposed to be a friend of the prince, someone the Prince cared enough about that he would work harder so the whipping boy would not be punished.
| Hebi R chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
I'm not sure Genkai would have the patience to deal with a house that moved on chicken legs, though she might enjoy scaring Yuuske with her metal teeth.
| Hamara Korppi chapter 2 . 9/20/2006
Wow, I was right! I didn't hear of Baba Yaga till reading Enchanted by Orson Scott Card... and have done a little research to find out more about her. Have you read that book? He explains the whole house on chicken legs very interestingly.. I'm off to read more of your ficlet.
| Hamara Korppi chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
Ok, so I know you have the ficlet completed but I haven't read on yet... wasn't Baba Yaga a european myth kind of thing? Some sort of sorceress who lived as an immortal by capturing the Ukraining god of Winter (who was a bear) and marrying him? I don't know if you meant that or not... haha. Anywho, I'm off to read the read of your ficlet!
| purpleeyednekoyoukai chapter 6 . 7/19/2006
I, truthfully, was avoiding this story...I don't know why, but I was...I also never noticed who the authoress was '
before I comment on your story, I'd like to ask ONE thing:
HOW THE HECK COULD YOU HAVE A LOW SELF ESTEEM WHEN IT COMES TO YOUR WRITING?
YOU are one of the best writers I've ever come across on this site! (and, let me tell you, THAT'S saying something!)
ahem *clears throat* now, onto my thoughts about your story...
1- as much as I had been avoiding reading it, I found it quite enjoyable...it made sense, given the circumstances, and if anyone flames you, AFTER YOU EXPLAINED, then they're less intelligent (sp?) than Kuwabara!
2- I loved the reference to Baba Yaga...I knew the name, but I couldn't remember anything related to it...I'm into mythology too...XD
3- the plot just...made sense! *shrugs* I don't know how else to phrase it XP
4- you'd have to be insane not to like this story!
ps: if anyone flames you, let me know...seriously...*EVIL grin*
pss: I think, for your story "It's Raining", I reviewed under two different names...anonymously, of course...Emma and Arena...
two of my main characters XP ahem, anyway, sorry for the long, rambling review...
ps: one more thing: I'd seriously be glad if I could write half as well as you can...you're descriptions are quite vivid, and you portray the characters quite well, INCLUDING Genkai!
well, I've got to go...I'm the official typer when my parents need to type stuff...
hope you write more soon! (as in...a new story, or more of your story where Hiei is poisoned, causing temporary insanity one)
| Kaizoku no Kazoku chapter 6 . 5/13/2006
This was a good ending. I really enjoyed this story. The only thing I didn't like about it is that I felt it should have been longer. Once again great story :-)
| Kaizoku no Kazoku chapter 4 . 5/13/2006