Reviews for Cinderella's Slippers
Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Nice job. I love the girl talk between Mer and Cristina. The ending felt like it was a touch abrupt or like it shouldn't have ended just yet, but otherwise it was really well written. Good job!

Red
Cinny72 chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
Aw... sad, but really good. I like a tiny bit of angst every now and then and you wrote it pretty well, not too over-the-top. Good job! I liked reading it.
Anon chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
Excellent job. But, if you want constructive criticism, I thought the ending was a little rushed (provided this was a one-shot.) And I also didn't think the first person worked all too well here. Third would have fit better, I think. Still, great story.
Lexi chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
aww. thats sweet. love it! update/write another!
skylinechick07 chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
good story...any update coming?
Sunset Knife Fights chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
This is great! Are you planning on writing more? You should.
katie chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
More please!
Christieanne-Anna chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
That was really good.
Madison chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
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