|Reviews for Fragments|
| AdrenalineRush16 chapter 9 . 12/16/2011
I miss our PMs too; we should start that up again someday. :) I love that you can make your one shots so vague and yet so understandable (not sure if that's the correct word in this spot). You do such a good job of getting into that other newsies's head. It's just great. :)
| Ealasaid Una chapter 4 . 7/4/2011
| Ealasaid Una chapter 3 . 7/4/2011
i like this one
| LBMac chapter 8 . 2/6/2010
That was just too damn cute!
| Eavis chapter 8 . 2/6/2010
Lovely! I've always, I confess, had a sneaking sympathy for Specs. I wear glasses too...
Keep up the good work!
| AdrenalineRush16 chapter 8 . 2/6/2010
Man, you really are a hopeless romantic aren't you? ;) That was adorable though. And the fact that it was about Specs made it better. He needs more cute fics where the girl is after him. :D
| Jaco Be Nimble chapter 6 . 10/21/2009
Ogh, YOU! YOUU, you wonderful, dastardly, /amazing!/ fiend! This was the perfect reintroduction to these boys... oh my, oh my...
*flutters at you*
You wrote them so... No, you /write/ them so very, very... boyish. Like, it's easy to see they're growing up and they're getting all those associated concerns, but you... still maintain that particular carefree sort of innocence they had. Peculiarly partial to the lackadaisical side of 'teenager' and yet softly, sweetly spreading and encompassing their... their /maturity/.
Oh please, if you love me, /do not ask for the explanation of that/. It would be a horrendous fop-up and would ruin all that was going for it's meaning and it's significance and, oh. D;8
In other news,
Truly lovely, my dear.
| Eavis chapter 7 . 10/21/2009
| AdrenalineRush16 chapter 7 . 10/20/2009
AHH! *flyingtackleglomp* An update! And it's about my favorite character! AH! *glomps again* You just keep getting better and better! :D Me likey this a lot and I got to pretend I was the girl Itey liked which is always a nice fantasy. *dreamy sigh* ;D
Yay for the writing streak! (Seriously, three different things in one week? Whoa!)
| Eruanna Undomiel chapter 7 . 10/20/2009
Congrats writing an all dialouge fic! I could never in a million years do that. I want to put in discription. Oh well. Very good. You painted an amazing picture and I love it. Well done!
| AdrenalineRush16 chapter 6 . 10/16/2009
*stares at computer in shock*
*does a double-take*
I didn't know you updated! OMMG (oh my michael goorjian), I thought I had this on my story alerts list so I would get an email when it updated. Guess not. *hugs and squees again* You just made my night Jo; the SO was very nice and this was a great fic. Mushy doesn't seem like the type to actually fight, but your writing convinced me otherwise. I love it when authors do that to me. :D
Thanks again and awesome work on this! Again, you totally made my night and now I is VERY happy! :D *huggles*
| ChocolateCoveredJockey chapter 6 . 10/14/2009
Fantastic as always my lovely friend. You do amazing! :D
| Eruanna Undomiel chapter 6 . 10/13/2009
This is good. I really like it and I can't wait for more. My one suggestion is to tell us who the featured newsie is in you AN's. I know this one was obvious, but I didn't know who you were talking about in Chapters 2 and 4.
| ChocolateCoveredJockey chapter 5 . 1/17/2009
beautiful story, dear. I loved every word! I'm so glad you're writing again..makes me want to pick up my pen and start working again. ;P Keep it up! Can't wait for more :D
| ChocolateCoveredJockey chapter 4 . 1/17/2009
wow...that was so powerful! Takes my breath away! I can't believe how amazing your work is girl! Amazing! I love it! :D