|Reviews for Operation: First Strike|
| nope at nope chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Very interesting...It could use a few touch-ups here and there, but its amazing. Keep up the good work!
| Negatronic chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Awesome ! Update soon .
| pizzaman chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Now this is interesting. Keep it up hotshot.
| Yellow 13 chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
well, i will change the story, but the changes will be on my site only.
| Anton Mikhailovich chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
"Disclaimer: I own nothing except Supreme Commander Roy.
My name and rank is Supreme Commander Patrick Roy, I’m in the Soviet Union military if you haven’t guessed."
Patrick Roy? How about 'Sergei Andropovich Belaia?' An actual Russian name for your russian character would be great. And no, you can't use Sergei Andropovich Belaia. DO some research, please, it would make your stories much better. And come up with a plot that isn't jacked from a bunch of unrelated sources.
| Piemasher 86 chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
detailed and good!