Reviews for My Inner Child
SugarDevil chapter 3 . 7/17/2005
oh wow, I completely love this story! you had better continue this! (please and thankyou). It's coming out really great. I don't know why you thought the 1st chapter was bad, I thought it was good.

And ha! I totally got the Selena thing, although I didn't know that was Catwoman's name, which is wierd cause I've seen the movie with her in it...(the non-drawn movie w/ The Pengiun). Anyway, still completely love this story. I love little Raven! (yes, I know I'm over-using the word "love", it can't be helped.) It was adorible when she was a baby, and even as a young girl.

okay, so perhaps I'm dim, or perhaps it was a starfire made-up word but what does "Stare of Yujethid" or more specifically "Yujethid" mean? I just noticed that it was mentioned more than once when describing Raven's mother's eyes.

Anyway, please be sure to update this because it will be going on my Faves list and my story alert thingy!

lots of love (and brownies)

Kris
Kitsune6 chapter 3 . 7/14/2005
Great stuff. Keep up the good work. I STRONGLY recommend you contact some C2 editors and get them to add your story. You get a lot of reviews that way. This includes:

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Dark devotion [2239]

Raven and Robin Shrine [3715] and

Wings to Fly [4509]
cheeseshirt chapter 3 . 7/14/2005
touching I really enjoy this It vexes me when people just read the story and don't review but whatever go you! *throws confetti and holds up flamer pinata* you know you want to hit it j/k update!
theplanetmary chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
I like it, really good I dea, I'm guesing you saw all of the "The End" episodes, I still have to see the third one DON'T RUIN IT FOR ME!

But I like the story and how attached Raven/Metrion is to Robin adn how attached he's getting, very well done...

Keep writing...

the planet mary and all her woes...
Dark Dragon34 chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
Awsome!Please update soon!
Grinning Grim Reaper chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
lol. this is great so far. please update again soon. ja matte ne till then
sorceress of the dawn chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
Hey I remembered my password! I think I just got my email addresses mixed up...

Anyway, this story is REALLY GOOD! I commend you for your creative plot & writing finesse (sp?)

ttyl
arielkid78 chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
I really loved this chapter and hope you update soon.

ariel
raggedywings chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
very funny update! i can't wait for the rest of the story!
Cherry Jade chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
Cool story you have here! I love how Rae is calling Robin "Dada" that is so cute! I wonder will happen now that Selina is here? I hope that you update soon!
Phantom Dragon of Eternal Chaos chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
Ah update update update!
Illucida chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
Update soon! Oh and what I meant was whats you book thats going through publishing about?
firehottie chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
i can't wait to read more!

* firehottie *
Tecna chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
Lols, that was funny as well as fab, update!
valkyrja21 chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
How very interesting. Raven really is adorable as a child, isn't she? Anyways, update soon, I am very intrigued.
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