Reviews for Together
eridani chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
Very sweet. Considering English is your second language, your grammar isn't bad. You could use a beta reader perhaps to polish it off for you, but I wouldn't worry too much about it.
Sora plus Kairi equals love chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
aww it was so good. and so sad! aww!
CSkywalker chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
That was awesome! Alittle more detailed than I'm used to with these kind of stories but that didn't bother me one bit! Great Job!
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