|Reviews for First Venture|
| RSegovia chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Another nice chapter in this story. Sounds like they've eliminated Tempus (or Alt-Tempus?) for good.
| Joseph Benjamin chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
Great third part. I think I've read part four and five without realizing it. It's turning into quite the series. Keep writing, I'm loving it!
| Verity Kindle chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
An outstanding wrap-up! Thanks for writing it1
| Kate chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Absolutely incredible. Good job.
| vilya74 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
I'm so glad you posted a new story. I have read a lot of your work and I just love it. You write very well and I really hope you will continue the Charlie series. Can't wait to read the next instalment.
| Admiral Lily chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
Very nice sequel. :D