|Reviews for Lily Potter and the Worst Holiday|
| IAmAFantasyFan chapter 4 . 3/9
Brilliant story! I love it! I will most defanitly be checking out your other works, and good job. You are an amazing writer.
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 4 . 3/7
Brilliant fic! Love the Lily and Hermione parallels... LMAO
| Neko-Tenchi chapter 4 . 3/7
I wanna read more
| Neko-Tenchi chapter 1 . 3/7
I LOVE STORIES LIKE THIS! there arnt many though
| Firewolfe chapter 4 . 2/22
I liked it a lot. It was fun to read. Love to have seen more Molly and the others however.
| RockaRosalie chapter 4 . 2/18
| azerjaban chapter 2 . 2/13
Interesting plot, but very rushed. I wish there was more explanation, more feeling. I'm hating how everyone keeps hitting Ron he's not an idiot. And what sucked Ginny dry and left the husk that is your characterization of her?
I feel like you downplayed every other character to showcase the awesomeness that is Harry and Hermione.
Again, nice plot. I just didn't really like how it played out.
| herart chapter 4 . 2/11
Good story. I loved the last chapter.
| Kash chapter 4 . 1/30
Great short story.
| Kash chapter 1 . 1/30
Good opening chapter? I'll say no..it was a brilliant opening chapter, can't believe I'm taking time to write this instead of just going straight to CH2.
| rayningnight chapter 4 . 1/29
Loved it! The ending was heartwarming and I actually admire how you squashed all that into four chapters! Some stuff could've been expanded (the OCs could've had better character development and emotional capacity - c'mon, they just randomly get a 'new' older brother/sister/twin? Someone should've been more kid-like and think: omigosh s/he's going to be the 'favourite child'! or something. Make them more human than just pretty backdrops).
Other than that, I loved this. Grammar and spelling was superb, plot was interesting, and the way you portrayed the canon characters was pretty much spot on.
| crotia chapter 4 . 1/24
I loved it, thank you
| crotia chapter 3 . 1/24
Wow, just as I imagined. Well sort of. Normally I think about how it could continue with great things that hardly ever come true. (because they often would just screw the story.) But this wath I imagine without it getting screwed. It's great
| anon chapter 4 . 1/9
Okay, WOW! This is one truly awesome AU. I love that it's from Lily's perspective. I wish you'd expanded on the story more - you introduced OCs that barely had any character development. Also, despite the war they lived through in their own time, it seems like the six displaced students accepted being stuck a little too easily. Sure, there are people alive who they thought they'd never see again, but there are also Weasleys, friends and possibly Luna's dad(? wasn't quite clear on his fate) who will miss/need them back home. I'd think they'd be a bit bothered about that.
I loved the writing, and Lily's portrayal was pretty much perfect, especially her reaction to Hermione. Basically, COOL STORY, BRO!
| BadassNerd chapter 4 . 1/5
Amazing! The battle scene was a bit confusing but I liked it anyway! One of the best stories I read:D