Wonderful! Moves right along.

Very good!

This night be one of the best what if I've ever read

one chapter isnt enough to make up for this ridiculous amount of explaining this story needs

you kind of made Hermione a heartless retard

I love Lily but damn was she annoying in these chapters, she's giving such boy-mum vibes from how she thinks of Hermione lol

It was going sorta okay until the end of that chapter. In one breath they say that Voldi is acting from the shadows without attracting attention by obvious crimes. In another there are DEs with Voldi (unmasked, undisguised) himself somehow in the middle of the Great hall holding everyone, including all students, by wandpoint. Does not compute.
Plus extremely shitty op-sec, you interview dimensional travellers and leave the door behind you open and unguarded and that's how DE spy got that info. For reals?
Dropped.

This felt rushed asf but it did the one thing most fics with this premise never does, Reach its ending

Loved it!

Very cute!

This may be a relatively short story, but it packs a punch! Really enjoyed this, and kind of sad to see it end there because i want more haha. Seeing them live in the new timeline would be fun. Well done and thanks for sharing!

lol there is just gonna be two ginnys andn two lunas

I really like the story. I also do like the fact that they really drove home how different both of the world timelines were. In the current timeline because LV was in the background making moves they didn't realize how bad the original six had it.

Depressingly tragic for those left behind who have to suffer. Ignoring that..mess this was a great story. Could've done without the much harsher end and suffering for the other one.

So instead of leaving the tragedy of her parents never knowing her again but being alive. Her parents who she would've had go into hiding especially with things worse are tortured and raped before being killed.

Thats absolutely tasteless and unnecessary to add. Especially the rape.