Reviews for Lily Potter and the Worst Holiday
AboveAverageBiscuit chapter 4 . 12/4
Awwwww! The ending gave me warm fuzzy feelings. Incredibly well written story. Great job!
ifellintoabook chapter 1 . 11/18
The idea was good, though the execution could do with some work. I understand Lily must’ve been going through a lot at the moment, but you wrote her as angry and annoying and downright awful, and that sort of ruined it for me. I did enjoy the concept of the story, though.
trekkifulron chapter 4 . 11/10
That ending was awesome.
BakenandEggs chapter 4 . 11/10
Awesome story! Thanks for sharing :)
BaekhyunSamaa chapter 1 . 11/9
Well, it good actually, but it will be perfect if Dumbledore didn't take the credit. It must be Harry! I'm sure he will still okay to take credit for what he deserves
misherukuro chapter 3 . 11/5
Good re-reading. Thanks for sharing.
dominaohyu chapter 4 . 10/23
haha i love this so much xx
gosh it has a lovely happy ending too 3
Panda Crescent chapter 2 . 10/7
Hermione announcing that she was Harry's fiancée kind of ruined it for me
The Shadows Mistress chapter 4 . 10/3
i really liked this one, good story!
BunnyTheGrandSorcerer chapter 1 . 9/21
Awesome. The ending was great. Thanx for sharing
Nickknack chapter 4 . 9/14
Real damn tears. Tissue damnit. Tissue!
TheSaviour24 chapter 4 . 9/14
This was such a good story! I really really enjoyed reading it :) Way to go!
Pennieyoung chapter 4 . 9/11
This a great story, loved the ending:)
Dragenki chapter 4 . 9/4
It is is a good story. Wish it had some 100k words more.
Ken106348 chapter 4 . 8/30
I wish their was more to this story
I loved it
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