|Reviews for Untold|
| Kane the Warrior chapter 13 . 10/18/2006
I really love these drabbles! I cried during some of them... don't know why, though. You didn't exactly make it clear which characters you were talking about in number twelve, so could you clear that up for me? Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!
| Glimia chapter 13 . 9/6/2006
I really like this story, please add more chapters. I think at some point, it even made me cry.
| NejiAdorer chapter 3 . 7/20/2006
This is really really sweet. I always liked the idea of Jiraiya and Tsunade, having gone through so much together, then torn apart by the wars and Orochimaru and life itself I suppose... it tugs at my heart.
| RedRibbonhood chapter 13 . 7/4/2006
Kawaii1 it's not bad at all, good job!
| Hououza chapter 13 . 6/29/2006
Good luck & best wishes,
| kekecandyy chapter 8 . 6/29/2006
omg this one was so sad...
regret is so hard...
this will be my last for a while i have to go eat now! _;
| kekecandyy chapter 7 . 6/29/2006
omg this one was so good!
i always wanted to touch the sky too
i want to fly and be free from this stupid earth..
neway adding this fave. stories!
| kekecandyy chapter 6 . 6/29/2006
| kekecandyy chapter 5 . 6/29/2006
more malevolent than compassionate these days T_T
i liked this one!
| kekecandyy chapter 4 . 6/29/2006
hm i wonder...
maybe a couple hints to her..? keke
| kekecandyy chapter 3 . 6/29/2006
| kekecandyy chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
ahh just like you and chelsea have corrupted me!
puaha...just kidding _
this one was kyoot keke
| Dolphingirl32173 chapter 12 . 6/18/2006
Sarah: wow ... intense. UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL FIND A WAY TO ANNOY YOU INTO UPDATING! thank you and have a nice life ... unless you don't update soon, then you will live with annoying little messages hitting your e-mail box by the dozens every week. this is another coupling that i like, Jiraiya/Tsunade. hope you update soon ... or else
| Matt and T.K chapter 5 . 6/3/2006
very good one. just wish they were longer. continue! it's an awsome pairing that should be used more.-TK
| RedRibbonhood chapter 12 . 6/1/2006
Kawaii!it's sad...but you're a great writer and it's so cute! Um...is this about Jiraiya liking Tsunade but Tsunade likes Orochimaru, because i'm not sure.