Reviews for Betrayal
Shannon C. Redfield chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Vege! How good to see you again!

Hey, I loved this poem of yours...and I never thought that Obi-Wan's "I'm so sorry" couldn't sound anymore serious or hurt.

I never thought of it that way.
Laura Kenobi chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Ah, I am not the only one who thought Obi-Wan’s “I’m so sorry” didn’t sound particularly sorry. I thought he sounded more upset, or distracted. Thank you!

This is very well written – I like hearing Obi-Wan’s thoughts during that scene. I like your idea that Obi-Wan had tried to start a relationship with Padme before. It’s a unique idea!

I’m looking forward to more of your Obi-Wan/Padme stories! Thanks for writing and posting!
once within a dream chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Oh, wow! I loved this! Great job on the characterization. I can see where you could get this from the movie. Wonderful job, as always!
Stephanie C chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
I am not at all an Obidala shipper but that was a nice poem.