Reviews for Behind Those Jaded Eyes
ArtIsAnEternity chapter 4 . 3/22/2011
i have an account by this name but i didnt want to log on. anyay.. i used to be a fan of kakasaku, but...does kakashi actually , ACTUALLY take advantage of a blind, annocent girl? on e ho as on his team? that he really, really cared for? no. ya gotta read the and watch the manga/anime, guy! he doesnt do this1! my eyes...!nub? twitching? a lotta kids are this site, my friend's friend's sister read fanfci. by the way, thats why i dont write lemon. at all. suicides as far as i go-people ban you from the site sometimes, though REALLY really good authors seem to be spared. tey to give a arning. that was not a light lime, it was a HEAVY lemon. not as heavy as some, but still...that's why there's a site called "adult fanfiction." you have to be 18 or older to join or view it. before this- great plot. though very oc. except for Naruto. you CANT mess up NAruto. anyway, the pot's really obscure, so a)hurry it up, or b) reveal the plot very much more next. STOP YOUR KAKASAKU IF YOU CAN! please! she is like double-dating, but she doesn't know it! i knew i shouldn't randomly look for fics.

you have potential as a writer, actually. your skills show out in your continue your stories, watch Naruto to get a better idea of the characters, dont let my half-flame burn you too much, and if you want ides or good authors to read from on NAruto pairings and how to write better, go to these guys.

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go itasaku and deisaku!
ArtIsAnEternity chapter 4 . 3/22/2011
i have an account by this name but i didnt want to log on. anyay.. i used to be a fan of kakasaku, but...does kakashi actually , ACTUALLY take advantage of a blind, annocent girl? on e ho as on his team? that he really, really cared for? no. ya gotta read the and watch the manga/anime, guy! he doesnt do this1! my eyes...!nub? twitching? a lotta kids are this site, my friend's friend's sister read fanfci. by the way, thats why i dont write lemon. at all. suicides as far as i go-people ban you from the site sometimes, though REALLY really good authors seem to be spared. tey to give a arning. that was not a light lime, it was a HEAVY lemon. not as heavy as some, but still...that's why there's a site called "adult fanfiction." you have to be 18 or older to join or vie it.
Cheekydemon chapter 4 . 9/2/2008
dont worry i wont report it i loved it and i would be very dissapointed with who ever does report this story cause i loved it ~!~
B-More'z finest chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
Are you sure thats your your first lime? lol its sounded soon your story is really intersting and I love it.
h3rshy675 chapter 4 . 5/11/2008
i love this story so far! plz update soon!
ARtemIs07 chapter 4 . 1/2/2008
oh... 2 guys in one day... 2 hot guys ahahahaha Sakura is so lucky :P update sOOn...
aznangel101 chapter 4 . 12/19/2007
this is a great chapter but i hope u hurry with the next chapter
quivering quill chapter 4 . 7/29/2007
it's good! please continue! are you going to make it into a moresome? it seems more than just one is interested in sakura!
Goatis chapter 4 . 7/20/2007
Why haven't you written any more for this story? It's so intriguing!
unearthing chapter 4 . 7/13/2007
Cool story.

Though you haven't updated in a while I hope you find the inspiration to continue. It's very well written!
Cherry-Chanx3 chapter 4 . 7/7/2007
ok weit, kakashi is still 10 or so older then sakura, right?

then how does sakura and him do all this?

but other then that it was an awesome story
msrandmgurl chapter 4 . 6/20/2007
update! it's been over a year! UPDATE! i want to knoe wut happens!
tHiS.cHiLd.WiShEs chapter 4 . 6/14/2007
Story is good. Thats all i have to say. The lime is cool to :P ;)
poisontreat chapter 3 . 2/25/2007
poor sakura, but healing itachi does have its drawbacks (like the fact that he is a sadistic bastard which is why I love him) please continue i would love to read more
itachigirl101 chapter 4 . 1/20/2007
please write the next chapter it was good
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