Reviews for Harry Potter and Fate's Debt
Lewis James Potter chapter 14 . 7/19
just a point, JK did it tooo.

Cedric died at the graveyard in Harry 4th year.

At end of 4th year he use the "Horseless Carages to get to the train but can see them.

At the start of 5th year he can see them...

He should have been able to see them at the end of forth year forth and question then not at the beginning of 5th.

On the other hand he watch his mother die at once so he should have seen them end of first year.

The quote is "Have seen death." Not understand it.

Great story.
Just William chapter 27 . 6/3
Are you able to confirm if this great story has been abandoned?
Jeckamira47 chapter 27 . 2/3
Damn such an anti climactic part of the story to leave off on. Please come back and rediscover this and write more!
Maelstrom15 chapter 27 . 1/13
I am speechless at this mastery, and I had to work hard to not laugh in the middle of class XD. Also, I like the way you portrayed Ginny and Harry's growing relationship. And in regards to the sex scenes, I like the way you do them. My friend and I read a lot of fanfics and while I don't particularly care, she detests smut, so fade to black like you do is definitely a bonus whenever I come across it so I can still recommend it to her. This is truly a masterful work of art.
SunPho3n1x chapter 27 . 12/9/2022
Such a great story! Thank you for writing this.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/28/2022
CampDBow chapter 27 . 10/28/2022
I enjoyed this fic even though it was never completed. The premise was part of the inspiration that led to me writing Harry Potter and the Ritual of Love's Memory. Thanks for penning this fic back in the day!
LordKnight007 chapter 8 . 7/4/2022
I just wasted my time trying to get through this fic, this is exactly the version of Harry that I hate the most. Maybe other people love this fic but this is just not for me. Voldemort could easily crush Harry in this condition, ofcourse Voldemort wouldnt be able to do it because Harry is the Luckiest guy in the world and accidentally trip and stab Voldy and then the whole wizarding world would praise him for being a powerful wizard.
LordKnight007 chapter 7 . 7/4/2022
This is exactly the version of Harry that people hates. The canon is 10x much better. You just amplified the fact that Harry is weak and cant even defend himself against insults. Yeah he gets angry and yell sometimes but that rarely happens and most of the time he just let them insult him. Idk how he's fit to be a leader with this attitude, he's more like that scrawny military recruit boy thats easily bullied.
LordKnight007 chapter 7 . 7/4/2022
Harry is just all talk
LordKnight007 chapter 6 . 7/4/2022
Why doesnt Harry do something about the bullying and manipulation when he's always thinking about hating it? Maybe he secretly likes it? He's so angry about Ron then he immediately forgives him without Ron even apologizing.
LordKnight007 chapter 3 . 7/4/2022
What's the difference between "Miss" and "Ms."? Based on my knowledge, they're the same, or do you mean "Mrs."?
doombringer282 chapter 27 . 6/13/2022
Sad this has been abandoned. Was giving this a reread because I had a good time reading it the first time through.
Mewpagano chapter 27 . 5/27/2022
dudezwesome well written... but no completeeeeeeeeeeeeee!1
murgel chapter 4 . 4/22/2022
I read along the writing process and even now, in April 2022, I still think of this story as the best, most positive and maybe even most readable, readworthy soulbond story.
And of course, I'm very sad that it has been abandoned or more likely given up on.
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