Reviews for Harry Potter and Fate's Debt
jay chapter 12 . 5/14
sigh..hermoine... why u gotta be a entitled fuck...?
Jay chapter 10 . 5/13
Jesus granger.. cant you just let it go?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13
Maybe dumbledore should mind his own damm business for once
Nightwing2013 chapter 27 . 5/5
Been 13 years since last update. I wish there was more!
Jessica chapter 27 . 4/15
This is well written and fun.
oujiswan chapter 27 . 2/28
Buena historia me gusta mucho
MasaruUchiha chapter 1 . 2/21
Old pervert
Just William chapter 25 . 2/15
Typo, "I would just like to peak in on them", Should be "I would just like to peek in on them".
Just William chapter 22 . 2/15
Several typo's, "Even her cloths were looking dingy", should be "Even her clothes were looking dingy", "The new one by Filch's office as she was no longer able to use her swamp", should be "The new one by Filch's office as she was no longer able to use her office" and finally, "Ginny peaked over his shoulder", should be "Ginny peeked over his shoulder".
Just William chapter 18 . 2/15
A typo "Here is not the place. Put it back on the self". Should be "Here is not the place. Put it back on the shelf".
Just William chapter 17 . 2/14
Typo, "Hagrid removed the green the steak", not sure what this is supposed to be ?
Just William chapter 12 . 2/14
Typos. "more noise than just laughter assaulter her ears", should be "more noise than just laughter assaulted her ears". Another, "Grumbling, Ron lighted several candles", Should be "Grumbling, Ron lit several candles".
Just William chapter 10 . 2/14
Typo's "Out of the girl", should be "Out of the way girl". "The mudblood will be first off course", should be "The mudblood will be first of course".
Just William chapter 9 . 2/13
Another typo, "You're going to give them cloths, right"? Should be "You're going to give them clothes, right"?
Just William chapter 8 . 2/13
A couple of errors/typo's. He was "tired for second with Fleur"? Should it be "Tied for second with Fleur"? "The approving looks and loo conversations", is this conversations in the toilets or what?
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