Reviews for The Experiment
tat5934 chapter 1 . 3/4
Totally loved it! I want more of Harry/George! Too bad it's too short!
DeathsHeadMoth chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Honey, this is so my cuppa.
Sugar, Cinnamon, and Slytherins,
DHM
lisa.demonic.angel chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Noooooooooooo! Need more! *drool*
DemeRain chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Thanks for sharing.
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Poor confused Harry. Utter win for George, though.

What was the likelihood of Ron and Harry stumbling across a place Bill enchanted... Like the explanation for what happened at the start of this fic, though.

I'm really glad that Sirius and Remus were there to explain things to Harry, and help him with it all.

I can imagine how hurt Harry must have been, hearing Ginny tell George "you win," I'm really glad that George came after him right away, and that that was cleared up.

Well written. Good read. Keep it up!
Aeromance chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Brilliant.

Bloody brilliant.

I sincerely loved Sirius in this story. His exuberant outcries simply made my day.

If nothing else, let this review allow me to convey how much pleasure I derived from reading this.

And this is the FIRST Harry Potter fanfiction I've read after The Last Movie To Matter Ever (Part 2).

There should be an award for that.

The supposed tension between Harry and George felt somewhat shallow for me.

Perhaps its because for Harry it seemed to be little more than teenage hormones combined with the awakening of a whole branch of sexual feelings previously undefined or because we have no real insight into this supposed crush from George Weasley.

But that's not much to complain about as it isn't unreasonable and doesn't come off as lazy romance (*cough* Twilight movie, I'm looking at you).

The writing? Top notch, of course. I wouldn't have spared any time in tearing you a new ass hole if there had been any conventional problems I could have lended my own particular brand of review magic to fix.

The smut, or rather physical stuff (because it never felt like smut here) was brilliant as well. And good sexy stuff along with good writing is a hard-to-find beautiful combination.

You're like a Leprechaun or something.

All that being said, since I basically only told you "yes, you're doing it right," the point of this review is basically to convey the joy I derived from your writing as well as a huge "Thank you!" for making my day.

Well, making my day in second place, only headed off by Daniel Radcliffe and his merry entourage.

Much fanfic love,

Aeromance
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
cute oneshot! bravo!
MissiYoung chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
i love bill's enchantments! he always enchants the coolest, most random things! this is the first time i've ever seen him have his own grotto thought lol
SugarCrumbs chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
this made me grin so much... i thought my mouth was going to stay in a permanent smile!

i know this is an one shot but - i hope to see more fanfics from you with this pairing one day

and if u ever dooo

please send me an email and ill be first to read it (:
Ravenclaw Samurai chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I really liked how you built up the curiosity and feelings of interest between Harry and George. I also liked the set up with Ron wanting to experiment and roping Harry in. A fun story! Thank you! :P
Katielorraine chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
BROVO! I loved this story!
The Artistic Fool chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
great story
WWT chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Grawr. Loved it! I wish you'd continued... like what hapened when they went back to the house ;D
Basill chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
lol, that was great! :)
Amanda-et-William chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
man...that was great! Great story :D I need moree!
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