|Reviews for Guidelines|
| Asher Elric chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
This was nicely done. I liked it.
| vanillafluffy chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
"El kissed like fire and death" Row!
Some nice imagery...although I'm not sure 'imagery' is the right word to use for the perceptions of a blind man. Which was well done-it isn't easy to write without using visual descriptive.
| vickevire chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
Oh, yes, great...!
Loved when he traced along El's leg. Loved the signifiance of the cane. Love dark slashy-El-angsty-stuff! So so so so GREAT.
| just jacs chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
very good. i luv how u have sands using a cane it allows him 2 accept his blindness. very good luv it m8 i like how it allows sands 2 b more open 4 his feelings 4 el.