Reviews for A Weird Case
Andy chapter 3 . 5/24/2007
Wow.. you really write the best bad stories on this whole effing internet..

PENIS ENVY? :-D too funny
fasdfawet chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
Oh wow! HAHA! A murdered and raped girl!
J. Dragonsoul chapter 3 . 7/17/2005
Oh my god. This was really sad. Good, but sad. I kinda don't like the E/O pairing but this was funny. "He looked deeply into her chocolate pools." *snorts* How cliché.
J. Dragonsoul chapter 2 . 7/17/2005
Lol. "Sorry Dr. Hung. I just have so much repressed rage that I don’t know what to do with it all." That sounds so strange.

It's so weird to have the show just brought down to the basics, without all the other stuff. It's like just taking a little clip from the show, each about three minutes apart, and compiling them together to tell an entire episode really fast. It's like, SVU in 5 minutes! x_X Weird.
J. Dragonsoul chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
It's like half funny, half serious. And weird. o_O
CoryS chapter 3 . 7/16/2005
funny chapter, don't know if you were trying to make it funny but it was funny...great chapter. Although it read like you were trying to rush through it. Anyway great story. Short, but great. Anyways I am just rambling.
aserene chapter 3 . 7/16/2005
Good ending..good story...very weird case.
LivElRocks a lot chapter 2 . 7/16/2005
It's a good story, a little bit rushed and out of charecter, but keep trying:)
tria246815 chapter 2 . 7/15/2005
ok thats a little all of a sudden in my opinion you rush it they wouldn't just start a relationship that thats just me.
tria246815 chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
wow mean olivia at first. poor elliot and his pants.

update soon tria :)
hpjsr chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
it's not a bad start...but some of the dialogue seems a little forced..maybe have someone other than olivia joke about a dead girl - that is really unlike her and out of character
XXXX chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Olivia would never act like that at a crime scene...and your story is a little rushed, but it's not a bad idea
bluejaybaby2010 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
that doesnt sound like olivia at all! i mean she is always the one who is sensitive you've got it wrong here! no efense
trinity-matrix-13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Okay, I didn't read much past the beginning because it turned me off your story. Do you really think that Olivia would be cracking jokes like that at a crime scene? I don't know, it just sounds kind of, really ridiculous to me that an entire array of cops, crime scene investigators and medical examiners are laughing hysterically at a raped and murdered young girl. I'm not trying to put down your story; I mean, by the rest of the reviews it sounds like people like it. I guess the beginning just starts the story off on a bad foot.

-Trinity

Memento Mori
CoryS chapter 2 . 7/14/2005
great until you wrote this:

He saw his chance. “Olivia, Dr. Hung told me that I’ve been expressing my emotions lately and I should stop. He said that the best way would be to tell you how I feel. Olivia, I love you, but there’s nothing I can do about it because I’m still married. I’m sorry.”

that's so...so rushed and I don't think Elliot would have said it like that. oh and this:

They kissed for a while but the Captain interrupted them. “We have some more problems,” he said.

I don't think the capt. would have dissmissed their kiss like that. He would have said something about it.

But anyways...good story write more please!
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