Reviews for Mornings Taken
ThisIsMyParadox chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
I love the last line!
mykkia.worthington.7 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Well have to go now! * leaves a note saying - go ahead and take the chocolate chip and marshmellow cookies beside this note and gone mrs. chono hunting * ( nother part of the house )
Yugi:mmm..yami! stop it! * yami licking and nipping yugi's neck *
Yami: but my light...! * gets an evil grin *
Yugi: O.O what? * gets nervous *
Yami: * brings out his fangs and bites yugi's neck and slowly sucks on the blood while injecting venom * mmmm...
Yugi: oooohhh...yami! good! * falls over on the bed and purple velevet like wings comes out of his back *
Lonely-Raven87 chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
The ending was hilarious!
jayme.scholtes chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
very good! i'm not usually a HUGE fan of yaoi but this was pretty hot! could be a tad longer but no other complaints. keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Sneaky Yami, the jungle cat... :D
Deadly8123 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
OMG XD I had that happened to me before but not the Lemmon. Never gonna give my BF the privledge till after we finish college. Then I might let him but no. Anyway, I had the Thinking its monday (or friday) mix up. Not fun having a twin sister and a cuz holding you down while I try and get to a bus that was never coming...It is a painful lesson.
CourtLynn chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
3 (: this was funny and cute hehehe
kit-lelouch ai chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
lol wow all worried for the bus on it's Saturday
Kurachu chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Cute and a brilliant ending! teeheehee
Saskie chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
rofl cracked me up!
Maria Starlight chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Hahahahahahaha i laughed so much at the end of this
Sierraness23 chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I laughed sooooo hard at the last line!

Well done!
kitty365911 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Me:~cackles madly~ that was so funny! and evil!yami!


Me:why'd you make him believe that he had to catch a bus? why not tell him it was a saturday from the start so you two could have more fun! are a really evil fangirl..~blushing

Me:..i know...~grins evilly~

Yami:...i swear..if you could you'd probably rule the shadow realm and scare all the fears that reside there


Yami:yeah?. going to take that as a compliment.. but if ever want to see your precious hikari again you will make good on never sending me to thwe infernal shadow realms

Yami:...O_O..yu-yu-yugi?what did you do to him?

Me: nothing you try to send me to the shadow realm..something will happen to him!~tosses a tied up yugi~

yugi:~scared out of his mind~

Yami:~busy untying Yugi~

Me:...any way.. great fanfic!
KingAleksander chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Ah, ooh, that was cute and funny and... XDD I loved it.
Mad for Beyond Birthday chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Good job. That's all I have to say, because this is WONDERFUL.
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