Reviews for You Did It
Christine Marquez chapter 6 . 7/25/2005
Curse you! That was a horrible end to the chapter! Update soon and explain yuorself.
katbaby chapter 6 . 7/25/2005
nice touch with Mattie; liked how Chris is all of sudden full of questions; in each of your chapters you have outstanding quotes; my favorite (or one, too many to choose) is "but his son-this son-deserved nothing but the complete truth." Thanks for the update!
katbaby chapter 5 . 7/25/2005
awesome chapter; loved the interplay between Darryl and Wyatt; I could picture the whole interchange; smiled at these words from Chris: "it was wyatt" "he had his brother back" Thanks so much for this story; it's one of my all time favorites; as a side note, do you think you'll update the vanquished one? that story is awesome also, but this one... love it!
JadeAlmasy chapter 6 . 7/25/2005
owch! that was a low blow to chris! update soon!

anianka chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
That is soo sad - I never thought Piper and Leo wouldn't be *together* together in the happier version of the future. Hm, poor Chris! How many hours left until the memories of this timeline return - and knowing Chris's luck, before he passes out before his seriously freaked family! Will he have any memories of the day after 12? And whats gonna happen when Wyatt gets in his face about whats really happening to him? At least Leo is there for his family, and being honest about evrything ... and I'm gonna stop with the questions and leave you to your own timetable; I'll just wait impatiently until the next review, though two chapters at once ... you rock! ciao ciao
DyingInnocence chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
shyeye chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
i like this story
FBI Bones chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
right, well ads it says in large letters at the bottom of my screen to and i quote "PLEASE REVIEW" thats what i am doing although im not entoirely sure what to say other than to update again soon as its really good
Martina G chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
Idreamofivan chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
Dun DUn! It was nice of Leo to be honest... even if it hurts Chris! I am a big defender of the honesty, besides if it works for Piper and Leo.. who are we to tell? I liked Mattie... he was super cute, troubled boy... I hope Chris can talk him into trusting him more... though the problem would be that after 12 hours the other Chris would still be the other Chris and won't remember having a heart to heart with Mattie.

I hope Wyatt can have a convo with Chris that can show him that Chris really cares and that he did a lot for him and that he is just happy to see he is alright.
Idreamofivan chapter 5 . 7/24/2005
OHH I so loved it! It was soo great... i can't even start to express it... Wyatt- Chris was TO DIE FOR! and the convo with Darryl was also great... still...did I mention... Wyatt was SO awesome and CHRIS... gosh it was amazing... and both of them together they are THE BOMB
Nikki14u chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
I just found your story and I have to say that it is very good. I loved how Chris is taking everything in and how funny it is when he finds himself backed into a corner. (Our Chris speachless, who'd a thunk it?) But anyway great story and please update soon.
teal-lover chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
ok, chris wasn't the only one yelling 'what'. How could Leo do that after all they'd been through? I thought everything was pretty perfect, except that Wyatt's girlfriend dumped him. And Paige's husband ran off. And-ok, I see your point. Halliwell's aren't that lucky in love, huh?

Oh well, at least chris is happy. Lovely chapter.
Sparkling Cherries chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
Chris gave a shaky laugh, "He says I'm a shitty liar..."

"You are." Leo's grin was conspiratorial, "I made sure of it."

LOL! that was totally cool. Leo had forward thinking so that he wouldn't be fooled be chris again. like that touch, very nice.

The glamour thing was genius and is he still an elder so that he'd be able to see and know all about chris when he came back? update please!
teal-lover chapter 5 . 7/24/2005
Wonderful chapter. And it had me laughing hysterically. Demons planning suicide missions around their parties just to annoy them? Funny.

And Chris's reaction, wow-that was so real, so dramatic. It's just how I would have expected him to react. This is a very original story. I really like it.
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