Reviews for Sons over Lovers
bec chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Wonderful and deep story! I like how the story delves into the nature of their relationship.
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
I love it! A wonderfully written AU, Mara and Luke still end up together after a horribly tragic twist in the story. And I like how you didn't name their son, since its unlikely that Luke would still end up naming him Ben after turning to the Dark Side. Nice work!
ladylookslikeadude chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
That's sad.
Osprey Eamon chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
This dark conflicted relationship you've given Luke and Mara's is a great piece of AU. The way she thinks about things - Luke, Leia, their son - is very believable and so is the way the alternate events are said to have played out. It's kind of... almost sweet sometimes but not. Because they haven't killed each other yet and care, even if they don't say it.
Vague Lenore chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Very good, and different. Intriguing actually. It seems like a one shot but I makes me want to know more about Luke/Mara's relationship.
Madame Naberrie chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
AW! How sweet. LOVE it. But then again, YOU wrote it, so how could I not love it?
Ishbu girl chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
oh its so good.
Stephanie C chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
ooh that was dark! I liked it. Too bad you didn't continue it :)
Spooky Bibi chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
I loved it! I am not usually a fan of Luke turned bad, but this one was great. You truly made Luke and Mara multi-dimensional. I kept changing opinions about them as I read it. That's the mark of great writing!
mar-isu chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
OOhh, this is good. The backstory sounds fascinating. What did Luke do to Han?
LVB chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Wow that was fantastic. A scary and real look at what might've happened if Luke had indeed turned.

The love/hate relationship Mara shares with him is vibrant, esp. regarding their son.

The ending line of both dialogue and the story were striking. Fantastic work.
angelsdarla chapter 1 . 7/13/2005

I absolutley adore your writing, and this fic has to be one of my favorites. Your insight into the Mara JAde charcater is comendable- a lot of people cannot pull it off.

Great work.
CanaceErinn chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Normally I'm not much of a Mara fan, but I liked the way you wrote her. Good job.
Luke1 chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
“Sometimes,” he excused at one point, “love is all we have.”

I want to grab you and hug you and spin you around. Wow. I mean, was that intentionally taken from my story? Anyway, that was beautiful and dark (the best combo). I've read Luke's the new Emperor and Mara Jade's his wife fics before, but that's by far the best one. Keep them guessing. ;)