Reviews for Helios Becomes
axel100 chapter 2 . 8/8
This was a terrific start to what could have been a good story.
TexasDreamer01 chapter 2 . 3/12/2014
Christ o.O
Anonymous chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
I really like this story. It shows Zuko's humanity and how he doesn't always search for Aang. Are you ever planning on continuing it?
jimmyhere chapter 3 . 6/5/2006
Darn. This looked really good too. I might steal it, if that's alright with you. Put I've got thousands of other fics to work on...

Well, as long as you killed one fic, mind updating your other ones?
StDogbert chapter 3 . 12/12/2005
Shame about this story going down in flames. It sounded interesting.
faLLen-dreamz chapter 3 . 12/4/2005
aww im sad that you arent going to continue it. just because someone else wrote a similar fic doesnt mean you should lose motivation. Yours could be different in any other way o This story seemed really interesting... Anyway, i hope you will soon write other fanfics then!
Sonora-Margaret chapter 3 . 12/2/2005
Hmm, well, what you were going to do sounds cool. I guess it's just too bad for us. It sounded sequel worthy.
RohanRose chapter 3 . 12/2/2005
oo u ended it... o darn
Cala Akina Morushiku chapter 3 . 12/2/2005
Aw, that sucks. I liked this story. Oh, well. I shall go read your new fic then. Bye bye!

ravenclawer chapter 2 . 11/27/2005
Some quality (gen?) Avatar fic at last :P

*adds to favorites' list*
Sonora-Margaret chapter 2 . 11/15/2005
ooh poor guy...
Katuko chapter 2 . 10/13/2005
*blink blink...sob* what a day...*lower lip trembling* that was so sad. especially the second chapter. You portray his...err...angsty sidish side well can't wait for next chap!
Pico the Great chapter 2 . 10/13/2005
I'm sorry, but you can't stop there! This is too good!

I like your writing style a lot; no grammar problems, no problems with OOCness, anything. Congratulations, I do hope you continue this story.
not telling you chapter 2 . 10/9/2005
so sad...

update soon!

mind:evil! (starts glowing mysteriously)

me: head is all glowy...

this calls for a dance party!

(some weird remix playing)


(doing some complicated dance moves)

this is fun!

not telling you chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
this is so sad...

but all the more interesting!

mind:take over the world!

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