Reviews for Identity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() he creamed inside him mothers mouth! Dudley and petunia. uhhhh that was a image I didn't need |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job |
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![]() ![]() Learn what the enter key is supposed to be used for. Paragraph breaks man, Jesus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo Wonderful story! ARe you still good? Waiting on you to complete it. You have some very original ideas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The cheese factor in this chapter is so damn high :o |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am late to the party, but the story is captivating. PLEASE finish it. tazdad47 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even if the story isn't finished after the first half of the chapter I was looking forward to the rest... but then the other half? You must have been a child when you wrote this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you don't make the other five on par with Harry using a sword and wand. Harry is understandably good because he trained for six years with the best. The others have had a sword for a few months at most. They could easily master a few powerful spells from the books but please don't make them masters in every form of fighting ready to take on anything. Making them the same as Harry is just rediculous and unbelievable. |