Reviews for Identity
observentuser chapter 23 . 7/7/2019
Interesting story. Hoping that you find your muse or inspiration for this once more :-)
ThePhenoix11 chapter 3 . 6/17/2019
You turned Harry potter into a 2010 faggot good job frosted tips wtf man have some respect for the source material
Schmaing003 chapter 13 . 5/13/2019
And sadly I am out. Infidelity is not okay. Having Flo cheat on her husband and him be okay with it was stupid and served no purpose to the story, neither narratively or even with smut as this is a clean fic. I was truly enjoying this story immensely as well. Assuming the author is still out there and this is read, perhaps make an Author's Note warning people that there is cheating going on in this story so they can avoid squick. You had a great idea here I am sorry I will not see the end. And to any readers who have an issue with cheating- there is cheating in this chapter!
Wolvie26 chapter 23 . 3/6/2019
love it! can't wait to see what happens next! hope you update soon!
Prashant chapter 23 . 2/19/2019
Awesome fic and was a very good read.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/27/2018
Hi, just something I found funny. In chapter 2's AN, you said, and I quote "This is a Harry/Fleur/Hermione/Ginny pairing eventually ... And this will not be, will never be, refuses to be slash." That relationship has 3 members of the same sex in it, therefore it is slash. It's probably not what you meant, but still. Also I think your story is great.
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Jimbocous chapter 23 . 10/24/2018
Good grins, but so sorry you lost your way and never continued this.

If you ever do decide to get back to this, I might suggest that you back up a chapter or two, expand on Dumbles' persecution, and use the crew's exit from Britain as the place to end this and leave any further action to a potential future sequel.

If you ever get back in the saddle and want a beta to go back through and do a bit of neatening, drop me a PM. For now, thanks for a fun read.
highlander348 chapter 22 . 9/14/2018
Fuck you
IncandescentOne chapter 1 . 7/16/2018
This chapter needs some editing, there's some serious wall of text syndrome at the beginning. Becomes much easier to read at the end.
Raymondjay41 chapter 23 . 6/29/2018
Fantastic & funny, please finish
kent-jensen chapter 23 . 2/19/2018
re-write or complete plz
Rascal chapter 12 . 10/9/2017
Why tell a musical band that he is a wizard, why not just oblivate them.
Bronze chapter 23 . 9/16/2017
Don't know why I'm really bothering to post this as it's been around twelve years since the story died. Yes! Died! Unless it's been rewritten that is and finished. That I'd really like! This is like the Ascension of the Scorpion Sorcerer. A very good story that died shortly before it was finished. You were a very good story teller Highbrass. I'm sorry you stopped writing this. But it was very good while it lasted. And so, thank you for post it.
Bronze chapter 22 . 9/16/2017
First you use the theme from The Good The Bad And The Ugly then perhaps the most famous line from Dirty Harry?! FANTASTIC! I laughed so hard I was choking! Finally at the end you have the moron melt himself through the ice in slightly lees the ten hours. Well, he very likely needed a bath anyways. I mean, in nothing I've ever read about him does it ever mention him showering nor bathing. Ya, I know he's more snake then man but that's no excuse for just how bad everywhere he lives for any length of time must be horrendous! Malfoy mannor must've had to be cleaned for years by those poor House Elfs after the Dank Load finally left!
tammgrogan chapter 23 . 8/8/2017
Hello, You have written a WONDERFUL story. I really wish that you would finish it. Until then, Thank You
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