|Reviews for Apology|
| Anil Pheonix chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
| na-chan chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
yay! I love it!
I have always wished Miaka kissed Hotohori! DIE TAMAHOME! hahahha...
well... I dont hate him .. it is just that I cant understand why she prefers him I would like a lot more Hotohori to be the co-protagonist :P
| AyndeRod chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
. . . likes but... is kind of confused about the way you had Hotohori speaking, as if he were two entities. Which, as I'd gone through the series, I never noticed soo... yeah. rather disconcerting? Eh. Nice little snip though, very in character for the fifteen year old Miaka.
| Sami chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
I liked the story it kept the character in person but at the end you started making Hotohori say 'We' when referring to just himself. It started sounding very Sesshomaru.
| QueenOfHearts3 chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
whoo! *grins like the village idiot* go Hoto-chan! heehee _ go Miaka too! lol a very sweet, in-character ficlet. what Tama said about Hotohori "relieving" himself... lol wow, thats so funny :D i wouldve done a face-plant in surprise/embarrassment, had it been me lol but yeah *thinks* you had the same notion i did, i see _ about Hoto's "jealousy" emerging during the fight, and his guilt for it... *shudders* poor guy. i do so wish it couldve worked out for him and Mia _
| kwaiiChan-chan chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
OMG I love this story! soo awsome!
| Yusagi chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
One-shot, right? Shame it wasn't more...
glad to see a new H/M fic, tho...very good, maybe he's got a chance after all...
| HoshiHikari chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
awe...well miaka's right...short but sweet
| KittyLynne chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
I really enjoyed this- you did such a good job keeping the characters in character, the scene almost seems canon! I always thought that Miaka harbored deep feelings for Hotohori- why else would she have been so tempted to be with him when she thought she'd lost Tamahome. And speaking of Tamahome, I especially liked the clever humor in the exchange between the two men Tamahome, and how you incorporated Hotohori's formal mode of speech.
I think making this a one shot was a great idea too- this way, the reader can make up their own resolution, according to what pairing they prefer. ~_
Thanks for posting this, and keep writing!
| Rena Moon chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
What a very touching Miaka & Hotohori story... I love it! And I love that bit with Tamahome very funny! Though I wish there was more to this story, but still it's short but sweet.
| LilacRose23 chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
When I saw the summary, I was worried this would be a MxHo one-shot, but I'm glad it turned out the way it did. It really bothers me when people make pairings that don't match the manga. Excellent job by the way, I think you've probably captured the feeling of the characters while putting them in a situation that would be very probable in the FY universe.