Reviews for Let's Stay Together Always
pyschoprincess chapter 16 . 8/2/2012
isn't akito a boy?!
pokemoncontest1998 chapter 22 . 7/24/2012
awwwwwwwwwwwww D:!
xXCaptured-AngelzXx chapter 22 . 10/10/2009
Brilliant !

Please change your mind and continue soon; I want to see what happens with Akito, Yuki and Tohru.

Akito better not take Yuki or Tohru away from each other
MysticSorceror chapter 12 . 8/18/2008
Things I liked:

Good descriptions

Yep she did go pretty fast, good characterisation

Cute Tohru-Yuki interactions

Poor Ha'ri

Ways to improve:

Spelling error: "wacked"

I really am wondering what will happen next

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Things that I didn't like:

Author notes
MysticSorceror chapter 11 . 8/17/2008
Things I liked:

Lol, Shigure said..not quite the right thing

It's good that they caught Shigure-san going up there

Fabulous descriptions

The clothes fit the characters

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Things that I didn't like:

I think Marie might have been better as a one time character but then I personally dislike tag-a-long characters

Arinesia?
MysticSorceror chapter 10 . 8/17/2008
Things I liked:

Having the chapters shorter makes reading easier

Cute Yukiru fluff

Ways to improve:

Work on spacing

Try to improve the characterisation especially Uo-chan

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Things that I didn't like:

Seemed to mimick the anime a little too much

Pace is really really fast

Overuse of the word said

"to the effect she had one everyone?"

Hana's not a physic ;;
MysticSorceror chapter 9 . 8/16/2008
Things I liked:

Nice writing style and I like the emotion and details

I'm glad that Momiji has someone to lean on

Aww I love the Yukiru fluff

Yay Haa-kun!

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Things that I didn't like:

Some of the phrasing is slightly weird

Disjointed sentences

You're missing the honorifics on Tohru's speech
MysticSorceror chapter 8 . 8/10/2008
Things I liked:

Great characterisation

Yay the Ferris Wheel will be fun

Aww poor Tohru but I do like that line "At least she'd be with him."

I'm interested in Marie right now

The part with Akito really seemed to fit her/his character

The couples interactions are pretty sweet

Great last line

Ways to improve:

Spacing

Work on characterisation

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Things that I didn't like:

Strongly dislike Haru and Hana as a couple

Writing feels a bit stiff
MysticSorceror chapter 7 . 8/9/2008
Things I liked:

Fantastic characterisations

Yay he got lost

Aww poor Yuki but you could expect for that to happen to him

It's adorable how in love Tohru and Yuki seem to be

Ways to improve:

Spacing

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Things that I didn't like:

Author Notes

Pace is a bit rushed
MysticSorceror chapter 6 . 8/9/2008
Things I liked:

Brilliant characterisation

Adorable Yukiru fluff

Great descriptions

Yay Water ride XD

The end part was pretty interesting

Ways to improve:

Work on spacing

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MysticSorceror chapter 5 . 7/30/2008
Things I liked:

Nice way to start the chapter with excellent descriptions

Oh the Tokyo Annual Festival sounds like lots of fun

You can rent beaches o.O

I'm excited to read more

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MysticSorceror chapter 4 . 7/27/2008
Things I liked:

Fantastic descriptions

Adorable Yukiru scene XD

Ways to improve:

Try not to repeat words or phrases

Sweet chapter

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Things that I didn't like:

Sorry I dislike HanaxHaru because I'm a HUGE HaruxRin fan

Pace is a littel fast
MysticSorceror chapter 3 . 7/23/2008
Things I liked:

Aww cute character interactions

Excellent descriptions

Poor Akito-kun, I sympathise with him/her

Good way to end the chapter

Ways to improve:

Make a new line each time a different character speaks

Try not to repeat words or phrases

Try to find other ways to refer to the characters than just first names

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MysticSorceror chapter 2 . 7/23/2008
Things I liked:

Aww fantastic writing style

I loved the Yukiru moment, - they're so adorable together

Excellent characterisations

Aww his phone is so cute -

Can't wait to read more

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MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Things I liked:

Excellent descriptions

Aww the Yukiru in this is so adorable

It's good how you mention the changes

Perfect character voice

Very sweet

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Things that I didn't like:

Author notes
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