Reviews for Inexprimé
loretta537 chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
so cute! what happens next? how do the others feel about tohru staying with aya? do they realize that the two are in love or not? please write more.
Graffite chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
I love the AyaxTohru pair,I really do...

So I may also love almost any fanfic dedicated to them...

well,not anything.

Anyways,this was really good. Pretty short,but heck,then what? I liked it anyway. And definitely... it's on my favourites now,pal.
HanaTohruShipperMorgan chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
By the rules you had to follow - and the pairing you used - this wasn't half bad.

By the standards of a regular fic, it wasn't quite as good as your other works. Ayame and Tohru were both OOC. And that's one of my top pet peeves.

How were they OOC? Tohru wouldn't be forward enough to go and ask Ayame if she could stay with him - no matter how much she loved him - and Ayame seems too... What's the word? Frail? I picture him as more vibrant than this.

Hm... Now that I'm rereading this, it's not quite as bad the second time around. Maybe I just don't like the pairing and it's an acquired taste...? The world may never know.

Have a nice day!

Hana
Adi88 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Whoa. Pairing makes me a little dizzy, but anyway, it's very nicely written... What exactly was the prompt?
xxDeadlyKittyxx chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Great story! AyamexTohru pairing is great. Please continue!
elliott ashes chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
Weird, but really cool. Sounds like a difficult writing promt.
mimi chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
wow!

very interesting...

i liked it very much...

how i wish there was more...

it's so kawaii...
Ezarine Bloom chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
This is SO CUTE! How could I miss this? I'm making room on my favs list for this!
Kuon chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
I thought the story was great and was wondering if there was going to be a next chapter to it.
Faith Lee chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
*pokes* More please?

Such a cool pairing! Who'da thunk?
Raha chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Hey, this is really good, and I hope you continue with this, there's not enough Ayame Tohru fics!
EndOfLife chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
HEy_ Great fic...you know what would be better? If there were a few more chapters to go along with it *hinthint*lol. Anyway,

Ja
peachpinksugar chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
That was so CUTE! I could just die! [But I won't, cuz that'd be bad.] Heehee great job!
Ashley chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
I adore this couple to such a great extent! Thank youu!
Nightfall2525 chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
added more like how does Kyou and Yuki take it as will as Akito
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