Reviews for Becoming Invisible
snafumama chapter 4 . 8/6/2008
I like what you've added. You've been able to fill in the in-between moments when the characters are by themselves with nothing to de but contemplate.
Isilady chapter 4 . 8/5/2008
gret fic..looking foward for more
thelackoflight chapter 3 . 9/16/2005
This is a great considering this is your first fic. I just found this and read all 3 chapters. Update soon.
Cassidy chapter 2 . 9/6/2005
please...right another chapter!please!
sara chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
great start keep going. i am liking Logan a lot. but i also like him alot!
sara chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
great start keep going. i am liking Logan a lot. but i also like him alot!
sara chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
great start keep going. i am liking Logan a lot. but i also like him alot!
sara chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
great start keep going. i am liking Logan a lot. but i also like him alot!
lost in pale blue chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Overall, I think you've done a really good job. There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but that's normal :) Look forward to reading more!