|Reviews for One Shot|
| ILoveTea chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
The others have given great advice. So I will only say this: Please update :)
| Katescats chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
Just read your story i like happen ending.
| bookworm86 chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Liked the story, though I have to say it WAS a litle bit rushed... Even so, if you would like to write a prequel/sequel/spin-off, I would be thrilled to read it!
Keep up the great writing!
| Me chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
The idea was good - but I think you did rush a bit and shoud have expanded it a bit more. If you do another part, maybe it could be a prequel and you could fill in some of the blanks. Like, why both of them were so sure they were suddenly in love and ready to profess it? It's not like they were never worried about the other in a deadly situation before.
Also, I would have liked to know more about Isiah. I really think you have a 3rd story - about him and why he did what he did. Who was he? If he was a Centre project - why isn't he locked up? Did he escape? Was he working for someone else?
As for the Jarod parts - as much as I love having Parker in control and coming to the rescue - it would have been nice to see Jarod do SOMETHING to help himself. ;-P