Reviews for Downpour
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2016
This was cute, and regardless what the reviewer below says, pretty in-character.
justbehappydammit chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
It reminds me of that scene in the first chapter of the manga of Ikari Shinji Raising Project.
dzk87 chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
WAFF? what is WAFF? if you mean ooc-ness, then yes. I mean, lets face the light here, asuka does not change, and will not change. Its a good thing she died, cause the fans would have been more pissed at how nothing acutally changes. She is the ETEEERNAL TSUNDERE!
Michael chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
This was a good story, it doesn't mater if you're about to go insane. (Read author's notes.) My preferred genre is romance and WAFF in NGE, so its tops in my book. Kudos.

P.S. Yeah, I know, a guy liking WAFF and romance, but watcha gonna do, right? lol
bannonluke chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
I think that you had Asuka's characterisation done very well. I also found parts such as, "Touji and Kensuke, as they were friends with Shinji, did what most other males did to help cheer their friends up. Teased them mercilessly." very witty and amusing. One of the best one shot romances I have read in a long time. Keep up the good work
Vic chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
If it is WAFF, it is very good WAFF. if you are trying to make it something else, it isn't working. very sweet and well written otherwise.
Marine Brother Shran chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
it's nice, it's cute, it was a fun read. well anyways, that's all from me

Cheers Ja ne
Awesome SxA, but it didn't stick to the summary. Too bad. Meh, it was good.


Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Very cute. You're good at WAFF. I especially liked Hikari and the ear twist of doom!
abcdefghijf chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
man thats so good keep on writing on this one please
Michelle chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
U should make another chapter was cute!
The Yuki chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
That was so cute! Loved it.
TaShYrEi chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
I absolutely object! This is not pointless! It, in fact, is a very nice fic...4 am? Not my kind of time...though I was wondering how you got your brain twitching up good so early...anyway, this fic is great!
Incognito girl chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Hey there! I loved your fic! I think you did a pretty good job keeping them in character. least as much as you can with it being a WAFF. but yeah, if you're ever up during the "wee hours" again PLEASE maybe write a sequel_ haha I think it could be great! Pleased continue to write.
dfcole chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
Awesome job! But why only a one-shot?
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