It's a chilling story. I was almost close to tears though i did not cry :) some thing gives me the feeling that it is either lily/snape or someone with Tom Riddle(voldemort) please tell me if this is correct. Though i think it may not be.

I din't regonize the parring but I love your fiction I love your way of writing. I feel something when I read. This fiction is beautiful and in the same time it's really sad. I didn't cry but it was near..

P.S : can you tell my the parring ? pzl

wow..creepy

i really don't know who it is...

Bravo, this is a beautifully written, rather haunting short story. You're able to capture emotions and characters quite well just through this one monlogue. Nice job. ~J.

Haunting, very beautifully written. Are the characters Draco and Hermione?

that was an incredible piece of writing.

it literally gave me goosebumps, which is what i think you were going for.

i loved the fear and the suspense given off by this piece.

for some reason i felt like it was snape/lily.

like this is the reason that he did things that he did.

that love drove him to ultimate darkness and madness.

it was chilling, really.

That was kind of scary. Thrilling. Entrancing. I want to know who the couple is. I started of thinking it was Remus/Lily, but the narrator got so violent, and it made me think Ginny/Tom Riddle, which I know it isn't. Tell me, please? :)

Wow, I am so confused... I guess it's sort of generic? I don't know. LilyxRemus? I'm just guessing, let me know if I'm right. The story is very good - I'm entranced, if confused, lol. Oh, and earlier this week, you turned me into a Lily x Sirius shipper. Congratulations, I'm converting. (Of course, LJ still wins, lol.)

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It's good. I'm not really fond of dark fics (I must have told you a thousand times, if not more), but this was written well, and didn't scare me that much, so that's a good sign.

Though I have absolutely no clue to the pairing whatsoever. I got the distinct inpression of Remus/Lily from somewhere, but that's probably incorrect. I really want to know xD