|Reviews for Affinity|
| so kiss me goodbye chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
I didn't realize you've been posting fic here for a few years. I wish there was more Monica fic these days, but it's good to go back and find some of the older stuff posted here.
I like how sensitive and compassionate Monica is here, and how consumed in his search Doggett is.
| louise chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
Great story, please continue with it, it'll be nice to see what happens.
| Kathmak chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
This was very sweet. I liked the idea of John and Monica getting to know eachother better. But, a piece of well-intended advice: please try to check your punctuation (periods/stoppers at the end of sentences, for example). It makes a big difference!
| justawritier chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
| Gothic Spook chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
I love it! It's so cute! Aw! BRILLIANTLY written! I LOVE IT! WELL DONE!