Reviews for Gold Dust
Night13 chapter 1 . 6/16/2017
Is it weird that i can actually see this conversation happening. Lovely a bit quezzy about the topic since its kinda like suicide ideation but I really like how you made it flow; It's like a short canon one shot. Not saying that he would actually follow through cause I find ritsuka to be a pretty strong character but we all at some point have some darker thoughts and I like Soubi was there to at least listen... although agreeing isn't exactly procedure.
TheNoahsArkCircus chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I like it. It's so cute

and yet filled with so many different emotions. It makes the reader feel how they are feeling~

Good work!
Hesunohana chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
just sad. It really reminds me of the last episod of the anime...
Seductive Venus chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Thank you for this beautiful fic. It's what urged me to write for Loveless, you know. I really like it. The imagery was too pretty and the emotions lying underneath was delicate like eggshells. ritsuka and soubi's relationship was tender and unpredictable- you captured it.
J Plash chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
This is beautiful. Delicate, fragile and exquisite. The title is perfect, not so much because of the song but because the story feels like gold dust; like it sparkles in the light a moment and could blow away in an instant. Like fairies' spiderwebs or gold dust. The atmosphere is just wonderful.

The writing is also very good (particularly the descriptions of the sunlight), though I'm not sure why you formatted direct speech in the odd way you did. It works okay though.

A great fic, anyhow.

Mrpointyhorns chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
Aww this is good. I like that it was in Soubi's third person point of view, it leaves guess as to why Ritsuka is asking the questions.
The Sacred Pandapuff chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
MINX don't ask chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Wow! That was REALLY good! Well written, well worded, over all

well done! You now have yet another fan. I'll definitely be

keeping an eye out for more of your works.

Uh, I wish I could write like you!

*eyes glaze over in envy*

*gets hit with unknown object by unknown person*

eh hum... sorry about that...

Any who, keep up the amazing work! You really have talent!
Decorinne chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Oh wow. This is going in faves for certain!
L-Zakuro chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
wow, very well written ;)

usually i would say: why didn't you use speech marks? But the way you've written it makes it seem more... real...? if you know what i mean?
Lady Psychic chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Wow, this is really well written. It is a sad, yet beautiful fic.
Lothliana chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
So swet So saad...

I really enjoyed reading this, and i don't say that all too often.

Thanks for a great read

cocoke5 chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
io llike and was good and youdid a good jo cocoke 5
Crede chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Very sad and short and sweet. I like how your story really had that concrete aspect to it AND the abstract...ness. XD Angsty but not overly so. I feel like I'm reading the lines of a painting. 8D
riya-chan chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
this is so painfully beautiful. particularly like the way the conversation progresses in such a subtle angsty manner. it deserves so many more reviews! i've reread it at least 3 times now. lol.
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